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Refreshing Story Line

I love the unique storyline! It's unexpected in a refreshing way and very creative. The characters laugh and argue like a real family, and it's easy to tell that they care about each other. Their humour, in particular, is hilarious. The setting is very unique and beautiful, as well. A little editing of the grammar and punctuation with something like Grammarly (free editing/proofreading website) will go a long way.

I'm curious to know what will happen and how the story will unfold. Great job!

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Sweet Summer Thrills

What starts out as a lighthearted read quickly pulls you down a rabbit hole where nothing is as it seemed. The plot is full of unexpected twists and turns that will leave your heart pumping. What I most appreciate is the balance between the terrifying and the terrific, well placed humour and romance providing relief where it is most needed.

I'm excited to find out what happens next!

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Strong First Draft

I can tell that this story has been a labour of love and that a lot of feeling has gone into it. As a first draft, it's very strong. You know your characters and the narrative you want to tell, both of which are the backbone to any story.

Unfortunately, the parts that are lacking are the details that weave all of your ideas into one beautiful, well rounded story. Thankfully, it's all part of the writing process and a little reworking will go a long way.

One of my favourite resources for work and personal writing is a website called Grammarly. It's a huge help in the editing process and it's free. While it doesn't catch everything, it can make the process a lot easier.

I really wish that I could give you higher stars, but I feel that I must be honest.

I hope that you will not be discouraged. You're on the road to something beautiful. 💕

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An Intoxicating Rush

Reading this is an absolute pleasure. The characters, their emotions and the surrounding ethereal elements are so palpable that it sucks you right in.

I'm also impressed at how well voiced each character is. The different points of view add great clarity and depth to the story without in any way detracting from it, as each individual's feelings and observations are equally enjoyable to read.

Magical job, Author! I can't wait to read more.

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The Essence of Nostalgia

Vivid descriptions, dynamic personalities and a tantalizing story line. I especially love how past details are woven into the text in a way that brings background without feeling like a full stop flashback. It has the authentic and organic feeling of a memory, which is very enjoyable to read.

All-in-all, beautiful writing. I can't wait for the next update!

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Great Character Development

I was initially impacted by how well each character is introduced. In a short amount of time, the author is able to paint such a vivid description and expression of each individual that I have a distinct memory of each one (including minor characters). I was also impressed with the slow expansion of their personalities, including glimpses (both direct and indirect) into their hopes, fears, strengths and weaknesses.

As the story progresses, so does the finesse and precision of the writing. The improvement is evident. If the rating was based solely upon the last half of the book, the writing style and technical skills categories would both be given five-stars. Well done!

All around, a captivating and well rounded read.

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