SoInHerOwnHead

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Meh

I loved the concept and the characters. The writing mechanics need a little editing (spelling, grammar, etc). The plot itself left a couple questions unanswered in my mind and i feel like the last chapter just didn't quite tie things up for me. In my opinion it has the potential of an amazing book, but it fall short in reaching that potential for me. Nonetheless i did enjoy reading it, i just feel like it could use some improvement? I feel like it could very easily be an incredible read if it ween't so.....unsatisfying in terms of overall readability

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