Stormia

Romance and Fantasy are my favorites. I also enjoy adventure. Make sure to check out my story: A Fairy Tale Crime. If you have anything to say then chat me up on my wall.

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Loving It

Right now, I love it. The detail is beautiful though I would love the paragraphs to be a little longer. Apart from that, from the first chapter I read, your story has amazing characters. I can see their personalities shine through, and I'm excited to keep reading to know what happens next. I also love the way I can relate to Anothney. I'd rather be curled up with a book, somewhere cozy. I'd say, for someone who is just starting writing their own original story. Your writing is pretty cool. I'm enjoying it so far. Keep on writing :)

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Loving It!

You worked hard on this story. Your work has paid off! I wish I could be as talented as you. Your writing style is unique, and I love it. You switch from character to character giving us readers a nice way to see how both protagonists feel. Yes, this is mostly done in books, but I like how you expand on their feelings. Your grammar is on point, and your plot is starting to unfold, and I'm excited to keep reading. I rated this story 5 stars because this book is exciting, and I can't wait to read more. Keep on writing!

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Beautiful

Your story so far is wonderful; I love the description you use and how descriptive you are. You are the first author I've seen write this way, and it's honestly beautiful. It was a little confusing at the beginning of the story but started to clear up. Right now, the plot is a little bit blurred to me, but you only have three chapters so far, so I can't really say that your plot is bad. But your characters are wonderfully created, I can see the flaws and traits, and I really like that. Overall, your story is doing great so far - you should keep on writing.

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Keep going

I love the way the she puts in plot twists to make the story interesting. I also really enjoy the way you leave your readers on cliffhangers. Keep going, the story is awesome so far.

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