T.U. Wrighter

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One of my All-time favorites

This story had me hooked from the moment I found it. Having read thru it all in a single day I thoroughly enjoyed every aspect of the story. Your writing style was very well balanced and easy to understand, also how you portrayed each character as an individual--especially Lea; I loved how she knew exactly what she wanted and would not quietly take no, and yet understood her position as a human in an immortal world.
Not very often is it detailed how one is turned either as a vampire or a werewolf which is what drew me in further to your very unique and scientific explanation. As I reached the final chapter and realized that it was the end, I unintentionally shouted my disbelief for there not being more...and scared my dog awake.
I hope to see more work from you or a continuation of this novel!

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Good research

As someone who normally doesn't read UFO type books I enjoyed the writing style and how easy and relate-able it was to follow along. Its very easy to see that the author is very knowledge and did a lot of research for the settings and the subject itself to get an idea for the plot.

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Amazing!

Its rare i come across stories with women relationships and its rather realistic, but at the same time its as a fantasy in terms of a shinning knight and a princess type style. The only thing was I was having some issues at parts with keeping track of who was saying what and who was talking at times (it could just be my reading). At the end of chapter 8 i saw that was all and I literally went "AWWWWWWW" really loud because i wanted to read more!

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New and exciting!

This is the first time i have ever read any story with futuristic, multi-partnered, and homosexual twist! It was new and different, I was able to see the story unfold in my mind as I read it and the only thing I can say is I wish it was longer!
It was easy to follow the story line and I enjoyed all the different elements you Incorporated into it from military, to racial stigma as well as the very real aspect of abuse in relationships that many people tend to stay away from or write off in a manner that downgrades its significance none of which you had any problem with. I look forward to seeing what else you send out into the world.

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well-developed

I enjoyed on how dark it was in certain parts because of the realistic idea of the social underworld I have. The details of scene description allowed for me to easily imagine the story as I read it and i liked the conflicts between the characters that not only made it realistic, but also allowed for me to make assumptions for what may happen in the long run, but still be surprised with the end result.

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