Tanina

I love reading ,and writing children fiction. Please check out my wattpad account @Tanina1 πŸ’™πŸ’™

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I liked the first chapter;Your writing styles quite interesting,yet I think the summary was too shot.IT needs more elaboration about the time and setting of the story. Also the characters needs some background introduction.Aside from that you've got natural gift for storyltelling. Your story may stand out if you add more details/
GOOD JOB
Keep up the hard work
good luck in writng your next chapters

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wow!

It's one of themost interesting stories that I've read on INKITT.the plot is really intiriguing.I like how you buily your character.The meeting of birdy and walter is quite unique.Can't wait for your next chapters.
GREAT WORK !
keep up the hard work
good luck

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Interesting !

It was a nice read.I like the start.your writing style is just so smooth that didnt have any trouble reading your story.
BTW What a coincidence !!😁
Keep up the hard work
Lookin forward to your next chapters πŸ’™

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my heart's content

that was an incredible read. the choice of words is mindblowing.The words are deep;youjust hit the nail on the head
keep up the hard work
good luck!!

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the goverments eperiments

like your writng style. excited to read your next chapters.

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Wow

It wa a nice read.I like the setting and the theme you used.it is always interesting to read about women and girls struggles.your story is a shout out to the poor,the homeless,and the orphans .I think the world need a lot of such purposeful stories.
Great work keep going

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Lovely

It was a nice read.while reading,i felt that your composition is really authentic,and that's what I most look for in lit.you've got a natural gift for writing keep going Good luckπŸ’™πŸ’™

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review

it is a nice a story with a good plot.but it needsa lot of polshing.IT would have been better if you didn"t not make a one block story ,and seperated it int small paragraphs.ALSO MAKE Sure to start a new paragraph whenver ther's a dialogue.Because it's a little be confusing to switch from naratting to dialogues between characters without showing thtat
good luck in your next stories

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interesting

it was a nice read.Your writing style is so smooth that it encourages me to carry on reading.Your discription was throrough and accurate.I like how you used an african setting ;yet ;i think it'd be better if you add more diologues,so that the story would be more vivid.
Goog job
keep up the hard work
waiting for your next chapters
PEACE!

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Nice!

It was nice read.I think it is a short simple sweet story,with a very deep meaning.it van be very effective to teach kids to love variety and disdain racism.i really liked how it was simple yet full of symbolism
It would have been even more beautiful if you added more description
Keep up the hard work
Good luck πŸ’™πŸ™πŸ˜Š

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Nice!

It was an interesting read. I liked how the end of his chapter is intriguing.they were some spelling mistakes but they can be dealt with.
Good luck
Keep up the hard work πŸ’™πŸ™πŸ˜Š

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Great!

It was a nice read.I like you description .it is so detailed,especially that of the countryside.I really liked how made readers think of ghosts as victims.All in all,it's really interesting
Keep up the hard work
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Fabulous

It was a fabulous read.your writing style is amazing. It is a interesting story with lot of suspense and unexpected twists,which allocate readers' attention to rape,child abuse ,and sex traficking.
Great job
Keep up the hard work

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Nice!

It was a nice read.I like your writing style. The summary was just perfect, and intriguing, which is the purpose. The story background introduced at the beginning is really good and helpful.
All in all,it seems like a promosing story.
Keep up the hard work
Good luck

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A beautiful start!

It is a nice different story.I like the setting. The summary was really intriguing,and thechapters even more.there are few grammatical mistakes,but they can overlooked.overall it was an amazing start for what seems like an interesting story
Keep up the hard work
Lookin forward to your next chapters πŸ’™πŸ’™

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Chasing cougar

It was a nice read.I like the summary .it 's really intriguing and invitin,which is the purpose. Your writing style is interesting as well.I really like how you use two narrator .it helps readers to view the story from two different points of view that of a woman,and a man
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Ineteresting!

It was a nice read.your writing style is amazin, and your description is so detailed,and vivid.it helps readers to try to be into the protagonist's shoes,which is just fabulous. It's really interesting to

read about ppl who are forced somehow to give up on their passion ,which most of the time their reason Behind living.
Great job
Keep up the hard work
K
Lookin forward to your next chapters πŸ’™

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intriguing!

it was a nice read! to start, your description is just WOW! it so vivid and detailed,it helps readers to try to be into the protagonists' shoes.Even emotions which are really hard to describe,You described themso smoothly ; it was just fantastic.
GOOD LUCK
Keep up the hard work.

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Fabulous

It was an amazing read.your writing style is amazin. I think that one of the hardest thing ever is to describe feelings but you did it,and did it perfectly. I coule relate almost to all the themes you tackled which really rare in my case.you made me question and reconsider my fears nad lost hopes.
Keep up the hard work
Lookin forward to your next chapters πŸ’™πŸ’™

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Out of the box

It was a great read.the flow is amazing.to be honest,I am not into fantasy ,and elf stories,but you normalized it and created a very normal setting for this story that made me personally really enjoy it .
I already fell in love with your character especially ismeal.
Lookin forward your next chapters
Good luck

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Great start!

It was a nice quick read.I like your writing style. Your story line is fine.I liked how the newborn baby is more of miracle which changed everything.

Good luck in your next stories
Keep up the hard work

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Interesting

It's just the sort of a story I'd like to read. The story line is fine.I like the story setting. Minja, and the nice boy are just pitch perfect. And I liked how she was an inspiration for him.I liked the open ending of the story.it was unsual, and unexpected.m,but it fiitted the story perfectly

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Interesting

It's just the sort of a story I'd like to read. The story line is fine.I like the story setting. Minja, and the nice boy are just pitch perfect. And I liked how she was an inspiration for him.I liked the open ending of the story.it was unsual, and unexpected.m,but it fiitted the story perfectly

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A unique start for a great story

I liked the start .it's really interesting. Your narrative is so smooth. It was a great read
Good luck in your next chapters
Keep up the hard work πŸ’™πŸ™

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An amazing read

It's just the kind of the story that I like to read.I was actually planning to read only the first 3 chapters. But you narrative was so captivatin that I've found myself in the 6 th chapter.😁
Good luck in your next chapters
Keep up the hard work πŸ’™

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Down to earth review

To ne honnest,I am not into this genre,tue I really enjoyed the read.I liked the fictitous world your created on the story.the move from heaven,a eutopean wolrd to the actuall real world was so smooth but meaningful.I liked how you used fantast to show how alpost all humans are living a robot like lives.
Good luck in your next chapters
Keep up the hard work

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Fabulous

It was an incredible read.the writing style is just pitch perfect.the description was so vivid and detailed. The narrative is interesting as well as suspense crΓ©ated at the beginning.
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Keep up the hard work
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simple,but heartouching!

that was a promising read.I loved HOW you mentioned the occasion inwhich every single poem is written.The topics you treated are so deep ,and experienced by almost every one in society.
GREAT WORK
keep up the hard work

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Diiferent yet interesting !

That was a diferent interesting read. Like how your poems are light,yeti meaningful.what I liked more is that you didnt share only poems but occasions in which they were written.that actually added a lot of beauty to it.

Keep up the hard work
Good luck πŸ™

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Fear

A strange, unique story.the plot is well-defined.a lot of suspense, and horror. Lookin forward to your next

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The with hunt

The plot is interesting. But your story neess some proofreading. So many punctuation marks are missing.that can take a lot of your story. If punctuation is paid attention to,your story would be an incredible read !
Keep up the hard work
Good luck!!

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Zenora the dragon's fury

That was an incredible read.!the plot is amazing. The style is so intruguing that my reading was so smooth. Can wait for your next chapters 😊

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The cursed coin

The story is interesting. The plot is amazing.but the story need proofreading. There some style and grammatical mistakes that can take a lot of its charm. Other than this the story is unique and out the box .I envoyed the read
Keep up the hard workπŸ™

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my dauthers are in love with sons of durin

I enjoyed this read.I liked the plot ,and the humour.really excited to see where this stroy goes
Good luck in writng your next chpters!

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Hot Sunny Day

Im in love with this poem.The language is so authentic,and it is selected carfully,making u live and feel the scene.
Keep the hard work

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the birth of a legend,a frozen adventure

frozen is one of my favorite movies.To be honest,I was afraid a little bit to read it.but it was just amazing reading your novel..Your writing style is intriguin. keep the hard work!

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Wanted by the devil

I like this !looking forward to your next chapters

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