Taydraa

I'm a 14-year-old writer/artist.

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This is a great story

I love the diversity of the character personalities that I've read about thus far-- Crys definitely seems like a character I'd like to get to know, and the plot is very intriguing; not to mention what a cool idea the nicknames are. You've missed a few grammar errors (just skipping over a few words) but it doesn't distract me much.

Keep writing; I'd love to see what happens next! ^^

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