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Gripping Horror

The story has phenomenal suspense, build-up, and inner character monologuing. I love how human the main character feels. her thought, concerns, and fears feel genuine and that's really difficult to show. The first chapter did a brilliant job of building up the protagonist as flawed and once again human, which the second chapter doubled down on. I love the ending of the second chapter it's an eerie cliffhanger that really lends to the strength of the chapter. My only issue with the story, and it's hardly even worth bringing up, is that the story isn't exactly unique. The style and methodology of the story are amazing but the concept itself has been done. That being said, by the time I'm writing this only 2 chapters have been released, and I'm sure with such a promising start you'll fix that issue in no time. I can't wait to see how the story unfolds in the future.

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I'm hacked

Overall I think the story is really, really good. The idea of a detective needing the help of a criminal is enticing, as you're drawn further into the mystery as to why she needs his help so badly. I also think it's interesting that each chapter is named and defined before the chapter begins. It's super unique and makes the story more fun to read. The characters all feel different and human, The only issue I have is there isn't a lot of time focused on their inner thoughts and so it's harder to tell where the character stands, however that can be fixed as the story progresses further. Personally, my favorite part of stories is world-building and characters which this story does pretty well. The character dynamics are fun and entertaining as well as developing. I hope to see more of the story as I'm hooked and want to see how the story progresses.

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