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This story was incredibly well thought out, and while I felt that it was a bit long, it held my attention the entire way through. The characters are detailed and go through a very natural growth.

The one thing that pulled me out of the story a bit was some of the dialogue. There were times when it felt decidedly modern, whereas the story felt like it was set in an older time. It just felt a bit out of place at times.

Beyond that, this story was one of the best I have ever read! Great job! I hope to read more from you in the future!

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