Fallen Angel

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πšƒπš‘πšŽπš’ πšπš›πš’πšŽπš 𝚝𝚘 𝚜𝚊𝚟𝚎 πš–πšŽ, πš‹πšžπš 𝙸 𝚠𝚊𝚜 𝚝𝚘𝚘 πšπšŠπš› πšπš˜πš—πšŽ. πŸŒ˜πŸ’£πŸ’£α΅€Κ°α΅‰ΚΈ αΆœα΅ƒΛ‘Λ‘α΅‰α΅ˆ ᡐᡉ αΆœΚ³α΅ƒαΆ»ΚΈ Λ’α΅’ α΄΅ α΅–Λ‘α΅ƒΚΈα΅‰α΅ˆ ᡃˑᡒⁿᡍ

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Interesting

I actually haven't heard of the creepy pasta's but I've heard of the slender man and I love the book characters and I'm now really interested in them. Your dialogues are really very funny and somehow very relatable. there is really good flow in the book and the descriptions are very shallow but enough.
However, there are some spelling errors here and there. Also, you killed the suspense by explaining what happened between Zariah and the team in the second chapter. You can also explain who the creepypasta are in the first chapter (for those who don't know who they are; me being taken into consideration.
I still love the book!!

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I Loved it!!

The haunted town.
For my first horror book, I do have to say it was pretty impressive. The start was gripping and gave me goosebumps immediately. The story had an air of mystery throughout which I loved. The flow was overall very good and things were well co-ordinated. There were few spelling errors here and there but that didn't make the story less interesting. The descriptions were also very well done and I really enjoyed it.
I have to say, I really liked Nathan's character and how he became 'good' at the end of the story. I disliked Brianna, the bad guy, who doesn't hate the bad guy.
However, there are some questions which were left off;
*How did the old man outside the town know of the shadows?
*If Simone went missing, after destroying the dagger, shouldn't have their parents realised she had been missing if everyone else in the town got their memory back?
*A certain Aurora was mentioned but what role did she play in the curse?
*At the end, where Simone was watching Nathan's video, there was also the little girl, who had the same name as this 'Aurora' are they somewhat related?
*If Brianna and the mayor were the same person, how did Simone's dad not realize that?
Overall the book was enjoyable!

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Hmm...

from how far the story has gone, there is great creativity. The chapters are of good length and very easy to read and understand. The title itself if very peculiar as I see it doesn't match with the book at all, seeing as the characters are still in university (as the book is not yet complete). The fiction is good and somewhat realistic. The sentences are simple and basic, the overall look of the book itself is nice. The point of views of the characters are nicely divided as we ca see their points of view from time to time. However, there is really little difference from what we see from their views and they are quite repetitive. Their is mystery in the story and it makes me curious to see where things will end. The book has some tenses problems which disrupt the reading and there are few well described situations, which can be fixed by a little editing. The flow is good and the story is overall very nice. I can't wait to see where things will go.

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Detailed and engaging

The plot is really very well put out and your descriptions hit the bull's eye. The character's personalities and emotions are very well conveyed and I really enjoyed the mystery. There is a darkness hanging over the story and the flow gives a good twist to the story.
There are few to no errors in the book and you have a great way of keeping me curious. Although I feel that you put great details to very minor things in the story, making me drift from the actual story. You have a really unique plot. Good book!

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My heart!!

I have never read anything like this. I love the humor in it and the emotions!!! The characters and your descriptions! I love the humor and the pure sarcasm. It's really heartbreaking at some points and really lovely at others. The character development is great and I'm really happy Gabe ended up with Ava! Hope we have their story soon! This really basic story has been transformed into something very twisted and the happy ending for everyone is just fantastic. There are few errors.
Every unfolding scene is a page turner and it keeps getting more entertaining.

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Creative

The plot is really good but very unusual for me. The description is satisfactory and I enjoyed the innovativeness with the characters' names. I love the character's interactions and how they got to know each other. It's really short and the added animations help boost your descriptions. I loved that.

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Touching.

I have never really read a story like this and it was just really sweet. How you made the erotica flow with the supernatural was really good. I'm impressed! The story is very descriptive and the plot is very unusual for me but you made it work. How the story started from sadness and ended with sadness was great but the emotions flow really well. It somehow made me want to believe in ghosts but with all the horror movies I watch, no thanks! You really have an imaginative mind and your way of using your words is impecable. I love you! I love the book! I'm glad I found it!

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A roller coaster ride

I was confused at the first few chapters. When it came to choosing who was better it was hard, decisions decisions. There is Ian, outgoing, fun, living in the moment. Then there's Gareth, stable, visioned future,long lasting relationship. And to be honest, who wouldn't want both but one can't have the best of both worlds. it got me thinking a lot. And there was a range of emotions throughout the book. It was satisfying to read and also educative :). Great read!

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Engaging

This is the only romance book that I've read that has shown love takes time. There isn't much to be told except the love story and the characters are both really engaged in the book. I can't tell how many times I have been swoon over them and their uniqueness. This shows how much of true love is possible through friendship and the struggles of it. Sort of makes me feel bad that I'm single and all but great read!

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Unexpected.

Well this was really dark. It was very detailed and it makes the one sided pov very suitable. I didn't notice any grammar errors and it just gets me in my feels. The story's twist is chilling and also flows with the story. Although it has the bad guy, at least it shows that justice was served and although it's wrong in so many ways, atleast justice is prevailed. I loved your way of thinking!!

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Dazzling

this is an amazing plot and really mind-blowing... Honestly, this was a really fascinating read. I like the self-motivation between the characters and how they deal with each other. To think that it started with a girl who went to the gym to boost her self confidence. To the whole stalker incident, the parents' problems, and how well the mystery is kept throughout. Happy ending after all is the sweetest and this one just makes it the cherry on top.
I liked the story plot as it highlights the insecurities of an obese person...his life struggles. The story also has a fluid motion, it does not get boring at any point. It also ends with a positive note. Great read!

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very captivating

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I loved this!!

I loved how this went. The flow, descriptions, and structure were wonderful. I especially loved the dialogues and thoughts on Nerin. They were simple yet they completely made her seem like a mermaid, unknown to the human world. The characters themselves were a work of art. Merrick being abandoned by his crewmates and Nerin with a troubling brother. The story solved itself in a very beautiful way and it was outstanding. Blackeye was also interesting and I could very well picture him with the descriptions you gave.
It was a short read but it told a lot which was very outstanding. well, Constance, you do have your way with short stories and I was mindblown by this one. There were few editing mistakes, especially from chapter three. The story is still great none-the-less and it was a sweet quick read.
I'm beyond impressed!

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Wow!!

I loved the sequel as much as I loved 'Amidst Chaos'. Sam was quite the character and it was really sweet. The flow was really good and the story itself was really enjoyable. Nate and Sam are really cute together. And Ryan! Oh my God! I love the humor and sarcasm in the story and it was lovely to see Becca and Xavier in the story as well. The character development was also very impeccable and I loved the whole story. The details are also nice.
There were few spelling mistakes here and there but still the story was well brought out. I just have a question:
*The person who hacked Sam's computer used Nate's laptop, right? Who was it?
Lovely story though!

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I enjoyed this!

The start of the book has is gripping and we are immediately immersed in a new world without any hesitation. The characters are fierce, interesting, and well brought into imagination. I found this particular read interesting and very amusing. The plot is simple but the twists are well in use and unsuspecting that I can't help but be wowed. The flow overall is very good and the descriptions are also good. The POVs from all the characters give a wide overview of the whole story and it makes the background to the story wide.
However, at some point, the grammar was getting really distracting and just made the story look unstructured. Also, some of the points that you outlined of the characters weren't really revealed, especially Lincoln's, when you said he was a monster. we didn't get much of that and it made it seem as if it was just put there for the sake that this was a mafia story.
Also, there was that part that Layah's father was willing to give Alaiyah to Santiago, I mean, that was why Arturo was working with the Russians. But over at the end, in the letter Layah got, it stated that Lincoln was the one who was chosen. I think that was something that was just out of place in the story.
At first, I liked Layah's character and I did have to say she was my favorite, but then she became spoiled and rude but the character development on her was impeccable and it was well done! Same to her relationship with Lincoln. They really need to work with each other and besides being very unbearable from time to time, it was good to see their improvement.
There was a burst of character from this uncle with who Amelia had an affair with and he wasn't mentioned previously. He is actually very 'on the spur of the moment' and I do hope that in the sequel we actually get to know more about him, instead of him being that uncle from nowhere.
Overall, the book can keep its air of mystery and it was actually worth the read. with few editing here and there it will be a masterpiece. Best of all, it lives up to it's title!

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Enjoyable!!

The author doesn't ever disappoint with her books. They are simply enjoyable and always has an air of suspense around it. The story starts off with a slight bump but there is more than meets the eye in the story. The flow and characters are very realistic, amusing, and enjoyable. The main character, Becca, starts off from a broken heart to a happy ending. The descriptions are also very well done and the story itself is easy to read. There are climaxes here and there and the humor in the book is also appealing. I especially loved Hannah and Rebbeca's mom. Xavier was also the defintion of a gentleman which I also liked. There were some few errors here and there but the story was good nonetheless. The most common mistake I saw was "Thompson" which kept being written as "Thomson"
The happy ending was also the cherry on the cake and the story also ended on a happy and swet note which was to be expected. The story is also a quick read which is also a good thing!
I simply enjoyed it!

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Great start

It's good and interesting you did a good job on it.
Amazing grammar skills and writing style.
Loved the characters and setting awesome!
I honestly enjoyed this book congrats on writing it!
Can't wait to hear more from you ^^
(P.S. Because the book is still ongoing, my review is extremely shallow, I'll update it when it's complete so I can give my full feedback)

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Nice...

This book was a strange one for me. I usually have a pretty clear idea of if I enjoyed a story or not by the end, but this, this has really stumped me. Whilst there are elements I enjoyed up to where I've read, there are also parts I'm not really a fan of. A chapter for me was a kind of roller coaster with many ups and downs. Some sections would intrigue me greatly and then others would leave me bored or confused.Well, this should be interesting, because after reading the chapters currently released at the moment. I haven't spotted anything to really critique.
Your spelling and grammar seem to be flawless from what I've read and the style isn't too shabby either.

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Not Bad

Well, I love the creativity you have and the characters' names are really well thought of; Ray and Dark. I also love the book's name with also is very interesting and the start of the book does have an air of mystery. The flow of the story is very outstanding too and well-timed. The descriptions are also good and very clear. The book is easy to read and understand and the characters are also very in touch with me as a reader.
However, there are mistakes here and there too.
To start off, The characters' names at some points are started with small letters instead of Capital, you can start by re-reading the chapters and clear those mistakes. There are also tenses problems, wrong misplacement of words, and very repetitive descriptions. The chapters start with the same description every so often that I myself find myself thinking that I'm reading the same chapter over and over again. with your flashbacks, you can also try using the past tense.
The book is really good but with the errors here and there it can be better.
But overall, so far, it's not that bad.

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Lovely.

As far as the story goes, it's a really sweet one. I loved Nicci and Ollie, Than and Amanda too. I loved the way the characters related to each other and Ethan's and Nicci's relationship was cute. There is lovely chemistry between them. I also loved the descriptions in the book, and the story flow was good. Though the story was rushed and felt very vague for me. You described things so well, but it somehow felt out of touch with reality. there are also some things left hanging in the story plot. The ending blurb is lovely, but it has some question left looming in the air:
*Did Nicci manage to control her nightmares? How?
*There is a part Nicci and Ethna broke up, did they reconcile or?
*What happened to Nicci's mom?
Is there a book two? If there is, I hope these questions are answered there.

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I loved it!!

First of all, I really love the book cover, it's very interesting and really basically summarises the book in general. The intro was very well put out and grabbed my attention immediately. I loved that the book kept wheeling me in at every chapter and the intensity and innovativeness of the book go throughout. It keeps getting better and better. The descriptions are outstanding and very vivid. I can be able to imagine the places you described, and they are pretty clear. Getting trapped into this world of Stormin and the orders. this has been brought out extremely well from something that isn't supposed to be based on the real world. The adventure itself is thrilling and very outstanding. I loved the creativity and flow overall. Emotions were well put out and I as a reader feel very in touch with the characters. There were no mistakes in the book which made reading a breeze and the characters are very admirable. The cliffhanger has me excited to start the sequel (I hope there's a sequel). I can find myself reading this book all over again, it's so good!!

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I'm not quite sure...

Well, I have only read around ten chapters. it seems quite interesting and it's very eyecatching. However, there are too many mistakes with the tenses, and reading it is quite a struggle. I'm not sure which style you are comfortable with but this needs some work. I love Trevor, Sierra, and Tyler, they really are kind to take in Roxanne. though the descriptions are very shallow and the work seems a bit rushed. The flow is also uneven; I suggest you open yourself to reading some books so that you can get the hang of it but you are doing well nonetheless. Your characters are really admirable and very interesting! The book wasn't my cup of tea but I wish you the best of luck!!. Just get to some editing on the chapters you've uploaded, so that one gets interested in the chapters that are yet to come!!

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Nice!

A very good book for teenagers. I really enjoyed the plot and the romance has a really nice twist. Excellent descriptions and really satisfying flow. The climax was really pleasing and I couldn't put this book down. There are no reading errors and the character development is very accurate. This is very realistic and relatable.

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Nice!

I love this. A small insight into the book. I don't have anything to say except how I keep getting more and more amazed by your works.
There are few errors here and there, but the book is good none-the-less!

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Damn!

I do have to say, this is your second book that I'm reading and I'm never disappointed. You're doing it so well! The plots are so thick-skinned and really dark. I like that sense of creativity. For one, your stories are really unpredictable and the characters are very likable or hateable, to say the least. I love that you believe not everything has a happy ending like we're told and that you very imaginative yet still have your thoughts realistic.
Though what happened to Gustavo, him being Val's right-hand man, we could have gotten a glimpse of him here and there. Your characters are undeniably well thought of and they seem all complicated. I love the blood and action in this book!
You do have some spelling errors here and there that make things murky and also tense problems. I also feel like there is little to no character development in your story. There is also an issue with the character's age (Luca's), names (Sofia's).
The twists are blood-chilling though! I loved that! Same with the descriptions!
Great read!

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50/50

Honestly, I'm not sure. The story was really dark I loved that. It had all the action and crime but it was supposed to be a romance and we didn't really get any hint of it. This is actually one of the few mafia/ gang books that actually show the brutality of being involved with crime. There is really a wide contrast between good and evil here and I love that the book lives up to its title. There are however very many mistakes in the book (a very big pet peeve for me) and your tenses are all over the place. What is most frequent is when you use "my" instead of "me" and where you use past tense instead of the present.
There are also some loose threads in the book like;
-What happened to Gustavo? You did say that he went for surgery, but did he survive it?
-How had Val's mom not noticed that his husband was missing?
You also stated that Val is twenty-four but there was somewhere you said that he lived for twenty-eight years. There are some other timeline problems that I haven't mentioned.
The book still needs some work. I love that it didn't end with some sick Stockholm's Syndrome and that Elaina and Val just lived on mutually agreeable terms. It would also be really great that you add more of Val's POV in the beginning chapters so that we see the two sides of the story because adding his side of the story makes the book look like it was untimed and practically rushed for it to end.

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Needs work.

The content is really great and you have an excellent plot going on. The characters are all very independent and unique in their own way which I really loved. Although the spelling mistakes ruin everything for this story.

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Awww

This was a really sweet story. For a highschool romance, it was pretty basic but the story was good none-the-less. I loved the characters and how you put real-life problems like sexuality in the book. The flow was really great and I liked the descriptions. Good job! I loved the happy ending!

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This was wonderful!

I loved this. This book, hands down, has the funniest characters. The plot is a very diverse mix and the plot twists just make everything more exciting. There are a few errors here and there but other than that, the book is really very well put out.
I have a question though:
-Chapter 62, hazel's POV, there was a part you mentioned Barry's dad, who exactly is Barry?
The character's development was great and I really do love their dialogue. The humor they have is really very amusing and down to earth. I loved that you were able to make this a real-life plot type of story with relatable problems and misunderstandings. Your point of thinking is very comical and very ideal.
Great book!
I'm glad you recommended it!

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Very Unique

I have never read such a plot. Not to mention it's in the modern world. You have great flow and the character's problems are not only realistic but also well thought of, relatable to both the story and me as a reader. It's really great that you decided to make it a sort of sad ending and the two protagonists didn't end up together. You have a very imaginative piece of work and it flows well. It's a great read and I really enjoyed it!

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Amazing

I really loved this story. Even though this is not my genre, this story had me hooked.

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Hmm...

Well for starters, you have a really good idea with this book. The introduction is very thrilling and captures my interest at once. As with the flow, it's really very spectacular and you have well... nice descriptions. Going forward, the book seems to get more interesting but the spelling errors, punctuation, and grammar deter me from continuing with the book. The book requires very heavy editing. The creativity also lowers as the book continues. There are some parts where you describe details very exquisitely but other major details are left shallow. I love your characters and their emotions towards each other, lovely book really.

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Interesting

I loved this!! I've read a few books on Greek Mythology and this is the only one that has talked about Poseidon. Honestly, I needed this type of breakthrough and learn about the gods of the sea. I love the descriptive element that you have and how you put so much detail into the littlest of things. The story has an amazing flow to it and you have an excellent way of keeping me interested throughout. You have an excellent way of expressing your ideas and putting the reader in the shoes of the protagonist. The story also starts at an interesting and potholed path but smooths out gradually. It is also at the right pace which is wonderful and very amazing. The mystery in the air is thrilling and with every new chapter comes a greater twist which just makes my blood rush. We also got a lot of insight from Peisinoe and very few from Dion, which were added in the ending chapters of the book. There were some spelling mistakes here and there but not that many. The ending is extremely touching and sweet however I feel like the story does not give too much insight on the romance betwen Peisinoe and Dion as there are many chapters that are on the problems faced in Atlantis and what not.
The book is marvelous nonetheless and it was such an exciting read for me!!
GOOD JOB!!πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Brilliant

This has had my imagination taken to the next level. The plot is really very great and well thought of. I have to be honest, the ending wasn't what I was expecting nor were the characters. This is why I like dark romance but unlike others, this one doesn't seem to have a happy ending, nor a sad one, the damn cliffhanger. The characters are really well deployed, expressed, and described, the story itself is a good one and there are few to no errors. Reading it at first, there were so many potholes but the plot smoothed out later and it gives one the feel of really being in the crime world. It isn't that shallow as we revolve around drugs, human trafficking, and prostitution but it's worth the ride. I love how well described your ideas are and how well they flow out throughout the story.
I also think you can separate spoken words when characters are speaking, it makes everything much more clear. There was a part that I feel you left out.
Benny.
I mean, you talked about him throughout the whole book but we really didn't get to see much of him other than him taking in Jase.
You could also merge the chapters because as for me, seeing 70+ chapters make the read very hectic and it makes me procrastinate against reading the book but as for this one, I had the eagerness to finish the book.
I loved the ending although it was very frustrating.
Great book none the less!

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Speechless

This was really very violent. It's an action book and it has everything an action book requires: the violence, the heart-racing action, and THE BLOOD! It's a very unusual plot but very well put out. I enjoyed the flow and the characters. At first, I was really disappointed in Xavier's character but after finishing the book, everything checked out. You have a really good thing going on here and your descriptions are very outstanding. Everything checks out and I love the story structure. Good job!

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Nooo...

I hate this book... smh...
I hate that the plot keeps twisting and leaves me hooked all the damn time... I hate that I had to slow my pace in reading so that I didn't have to finish this book. I hate how the book gives me a very very pleasant vibe. I hate how well you described and expressed your thoughts and how much I loved it. I hate how I wasn't ready for the major climaxes in the book and that made me love it even more. I hate that this book has very few reviews but I see you're working on that. I hate that the book has captured my mind and I hate that it has ended so soon.

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Hi Lily,
I hope you note the sarcasm in the word hate, I completely loved the book and I hope you take it lightly. You made a common werewolf story very eye-catching and your characters are really appealing. You have a few spelling errors here and there. It needs some work. It's really a lovely piece of work and the cliffhanger at the end is remarkable... Although I wasn't ready...

PSHHH, WHO AM I KIDDING, I WASN'T READY FOR ANYTHING AT ALL IN THIS BOOK!!!
Thanks, for recommending it!

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Best friends.

This was a really adventurous story. The secrets they hid and how good they go with each other.

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Romantic

There is good flow, the romance is endearing and I can feel the chemistry between them two..

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Sweet

Nice school romance here. Great read!!!

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Amusing

Arranged marriages. I'm really not a fan of these types of stories but I do read them.
What I liked about your story:
Abhi was not a jerk and they actually got to know Aadhi. So we skip the whole painful one-sided marriage and begin a romance of two complete strangers. The story is pretty simple and well put out. The characters are really relatable and it has a human feel to it. There is the presence of the romance which is amusing and sweet at the same time. It makes everything interesting for the fact that it's an Indian love story and we get a glimpse of the beautiful culture.
Things I didn't like in your story:
There are very few descriptions and we don't really get scenarios that are in-depth and really well visualized. I feel like the story is on a beginner's level because of its vagueness. There is also no big climax in the story hence making it very bland and flat. The spelling mistakes are also my biggest pet peeves like somewhere you wrote "sry" instead of "sorry". The story also began in the present tense then somewhere in the middle, it changed to past tense. I also felt like there was a struggle in writing it in the present tense but after you began writing it in the past tense, the story felt a little bit more relaxed and comfortable. But still, you kept mixing the tenses which honestly ruined the reading experience.

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Awwwww

Highschool romance.
This was really sweet and very amusing for me. I loved the characters and it was really good character development. Tanya finally got along with her parents and Liam's flirting was really amusing. I couldn't help but laugh at the humor. I like the attitude of Tanya. Seb and Sam were really great friends although it would have been better if we got their POV on how they chipped in to Liam's and Tanya's relationship. Great story although you need to do some editing here and there. It's hard to keep up with the book when it has errors.

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I loved this!!!

How you merged two completely different plots together is really outstanding. The characters are really very humourous and it was good to see how the story played out. It really showed how small the world is and the emotions are really overwhelming. Descriptions are great and the story is fully complete. Everything checks out. I loved the book!!

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This was good!

The witch and the werewolf.
it was a very livid read for me and I really enjoyed it. The descriptions are really well done and the flow is really great. The story wasn't really what I expected but it was great none the less. There were really unexpected turns in the story and I love the originality here.

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Mhmm

I loved this story, some of the grammar and punctuation was off but it was little things like β€œto” and β€œtoo” or β€œyour” and β€œyou’re” but overall it was very nice

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Wow!

This is really in-depth with the feelings and I got hooked. There is more than werewolves and the emotions are really endearing. I felt like part of the story, physically and it's really mind-grabbing. I like how the story played out. It was quite predictable except the part where Benjamin attacked Madeline. For the first part of the story you were really very detailed but as you continued, I felt like things kept getting bland. This needs heavy editing. At the start, you began with the character's POV but in the middle, you moved to third person. There was some inconsistency here and there and there were some things that you just completely left out.
-Why did Benjamin's Dad want the pack so much?
Brandon was also cut off from the scene too easily. We didn't really explore to him that much and what about Casey? For you to have mentioned that there was something that could have been between them, there had to be a reason. I don't think it should have been a random point as you put it. It was really great to read this book.

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Simple.

It was a really brief read. I've never tried shifter books before and some parts were really cringy for me. There a few things that were not that realistic but whatever. It was a good book none the less. I like that you wrote it in male POV and there were places you gave us a really brief description and others a very detailed one. In my view, I didn't see any eye-catching plot and development. Good job though!

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I have no words!

I laughed, I cried and I felt sadness, fear. All of it. This is a really good werewolf story and the way the basic plot is twisted to make this really magical is amazing. There was so much going on and the endless possibilities of how this story could have turned out were amazing. I'm glad that there wasn't only one villain that makes the story very basic and that there were many plots throughout the story. The characters are really amusing and I got really attached to them. However, I feel like the bonus chapters were a bit of a mess. For example,
- I think that Mila's birth should have been part of the book instead of the bonus chapters since there was a big time jump from when Malcolm was killed to the birth of Felix and Mila.

-The story of Aleksei finding his mate should not have been among the first of the bonus chapters since his story is completely different from Alrik's and Jaslynn's.
There was also some parts left hanging loose, like
-What happened to Ester and that seagull guy?
-What about the orphanage that was to be built on sector three?
It was also really great that you Added the Moon Godess's point of view and it gave a really amusing yet pleasing picture. The descriptions are really well detailed and the character development is amazing. I liked the story and the humor was out of this world.

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Unexpected

This really is a dark romance and very twisted. I love the flow and your brief descriptions on it. It really isn't what everyone wants to read but I love the fact that the stroy ended happily but not all sunshine and rainbows. The book needs heavy editing and there some parts where I think you left loose ends, like,
-Why did Hayden's brother need the money?
-If Blaine wanted Hayden from the beginning, how did he know of her and why did he use his method?
-Why did Grayson want Hayden that much?
Great read though!!

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Romance

I really loved Abigail and Nathan. They all had their issues but I really love their character development especially Nathan's. I totally love Natalie's character and she's a true friend. The plot is really nerve-wracking and really complicated. It is one of the few stories that has the female lead as a strong woman. The twists are really well planned out and the flow is really well thought of. You haven't described much but it leaves a lot to the readers imagination.
The story needs intensive editing as well, but their was a fair warning about that in the starting.
One thing that bugged me too much, is the amount of bonus chapters the author has included. No doubt, everybody likes to know how their favorite characters are doing after the book ends, but the author shouldn't have included so many bonus chapters, when even the book is a long one.
Nevertheless, I think this book has potential with editing and proofreading done.

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Awww

I loved this! It was really sweet and the descriptions are brief but on point. I love the summary and it's really touching. The emotions are very clear to see and overwhelming for the characters as from my view. There are a few errors and you also have some issues with punctuations. Touching story really! I loved it.

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Okay.

I think that the title and the story are two really irrelevant things. We really got a short glimpse of the brother and the descriptions are not quite in place. The only thing you got to describe was the Churan and the danger they were in. I think it would have been better if we got a brief description of how the brother looked, how difficult things were, the wars included and how exactly the brother managed to get the protagonist managed to survive through out all of this problems. To add a a twist, you could have probably stated if the kids were orphans or not, and if they were, what happened to the parents. You can also describe how people around them:
-What state are they in?
-Why was there a war?
It's not a bad story, but it just needs to be thickened to make it stronger. There is no grammartical errors from what I've noticed but it's really amazing that you got your idea out there.πŸ™ƒπŸ™ƒ

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Satisfying

I love that the couple was willing to adventure and your descriptions were outstanding! The timelines are really steady and very eased. The love between the old couple was sweet and I love their little adventure. Old really is gold!

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Okay

This was a really erotic book. I was really swoon with the characters and I couldn't help but feel attached. For an action book, you captured the mafia violence really well and it suits your plot. I loved the happy ending, who doesn't and the flow was really good.

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Thrilling!

Xavier and Angela are two amazing characters. It's an interesting read. I read it from Wattpad but I just thought I should review it here because it's a good book. The plot isn't really that different, the billionaire bad boy and the good girl. I would say it was cliche but the plane crash caught me off-guard. I would say that the story isn't quite into depth and the only thing you seem to be describing in detail is Angela's clothes. There were really sweet moments where I felt you could have made them sweeter if you added some spice to it. The opening scenes are interesting and eye-catching. Other than grammatical errors I loved the story. However Claudia Thatcher became Claudia Hemsworth in Chapter 29 of which was confusing to me. Also the fact that after the company's jamboree the receptionist and PA didn't know Angela was confusing as well. All these mistakes does not take away the talent behind this story and it's entertainment value. The humor is lovely and the characters relations.

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Hmmmmm....

This was quite a story. It's really simple but I can get emotions through your words and it makes a really sweet ending. Although there are some questionable parts:
-How did y/n die?
-How come Jimin, Jennie, Tae and Y/n never cross paths considering the fact that so many were involved in this affair?
I feel like the ending was rushed but none the less, the story was great. There were few errors and spellings.

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Swoon

I love the quality of depth you have in the book. It's really amazing to see someone really put effort in their work. I loved the characters and how they interact with one another but for a school romance, we got very few moments of them actually reading and it was more of a party to party story. I also think you could have made Aurora into a more nutured person, for one most of the things she doesn't know are common knowledge really but she seems amazing. Also I would have liked to see more of Maddox's story, his past. It's like we just get a peek and then everything just ends like I wanted to read about his mother, his real mother, and more about his past and memories, why he doesn't get along with his dad, to mention a few.
What about her living with guys? I particularly didn't read where you gave a reason why she wasn't put in a girl's dorm, considering that Maddox was living in a school provided dorm so for her to be living with guys, in school premises just made things very questionable. there wer no errors that I noticed and the flow was incredible. Great read!

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Wow

I'm spellbound! This was very exciting and an amazing read! I love the humor in it. Romance, humor, drama, and action all in one. You won me! I didn't expect the ending to be so soon but it was worth the read! I'm a fan of greek mythology and for one, this book has it and it's amazing!

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Rushed

I love the book and the story but it’s getting confusing how the POV changes in the middle of the story Instead of the beginning of the chapter because you can never tell who’s talking or who’s POV it is. The ending was also really rushed and I feel like you could have added more depth to it. The descriptions are also shallow but the action int he book is great. I enjoyed the read but with spelling mistakes it made it hard to understand everything. Good job thoug!

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Amusing

Very good story steamy sexy good storyline enjoyed it. This felt like something I would read from a gossip magazine, juicy, dirty, and forbidden! The descriptions are really shallow though but the plot is really good. There are also some errors here and there but it doesn't make the story any worse.

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Loved it!

It was very interesting and amusing to read. The problems are really conflicting but they all find a solution. Excited for the sequel!

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The cliche

I was warned, it was really cliche XD XD but it was also touching. The book is simplified and it's on point. Very short story but beggars can't be choosers. You could add some details here and there to add some depth to it. But I was wowed by the happy ever after.

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The chemistry

You get lost in it and the chemistry is amazing. The POV's make it easier to get each character's emotions and the flow is quite good. It's heart fulfilling and very satisfying. The start is also out of the ordinary and very unusual. Loved the ending although the emotions aren't really that strong for me. You could work on that!!

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Okayyy

Short story. I love all the characters in the book and how they are free with each other. I, however don't know if this should be applied in real life (I'm confused lol). Are the facts about losing your friends due to sexual tension real? Idk, but it's good to see that friends are willing to be open to each other. Loved the happy ending!!

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Bull's eye

The story is detailed and on point. The fact that it's a short story makes one want to read more. It's really satisfying for an erotica book and the thoughts are well explained. Hands down, very sensual. I loved it!

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Not bad

The story starts off nicely and we get a glimpse of the characters life, there are a few errors and the story is really very descriptive... too bad it's not fully published here.

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Unexpected.

It was really satisfying and thrilling to read. It's really sad that Justin died and it was an unexpected. There was some questionable parts in the read;
-Why did Caleb want those interviews so bad?
-There should have been a more solid reason for Caleb to want to hurt the girl other than losing his job.
-How did he meet Kevin?
There is a range of emotions throughout but comforting.

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Not that of a cliche

High school romance. I'm not really a fan of it but this works out. The bad boy falling for the good girl except the good girl isn't actually good and the bad boy isn't actually bad. The humor in the book is incredible. I feel like the timelines aren't that realistic though but the story's touching. I like the effort put in the book and the feelings are really touching. The dramatic scenes with a pinch of tears. I enjoyed the read!

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Woah!

This booked is so messed up, and I'm messed up, so it checks out. The plot is so nerve-racking. I love that it shows the victims coming out stronger and it's really feminist. There are some mistakes and it would make the book easier to read if you checked them out. The story gives me goosebumps and it flows really well. I think it would be better if you showed how Chris was found so that everything checks out. Some more vivid descriptions would also do. The story is very realistic and it's just really sad that the dad didn't get a chance to change his ways. I also think it could have been better if you gave a better solution than him dying and Zach going free. It would be better if justice was served in the right way. I enjoyed it none the less

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Idkkkk

I feel bad that I only got to read three chapters and it's the first book of the series. It would have been better if I knew the background to the story as I continue with the series. It has quite an interesting catch to it though, thumbs up !!

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Interesting

The author has a special writing style that is unique to her. It is sophisticated yet easy and modern for any reader to relate and understand. I can aslo tell the research was well done and it just shows how much effort she put into the book. It was a learning experience for me as well as entertaining. There are also few to no errors. Good job!!

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Fascinating.

The story isn't that detailed but it has everything covered. I like the characters but we have a really shallow description of them and it's on point. I thnik you could narrow down to show the feelings of the parents that lost their kid. There is also some spelling mistakes her and there. Check up on that.

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Addictive

I have had an amazing time with this book and it keeps me wanting more after every chapter.

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Incredible

The book is really captivating and it has very many unpredictable scenes. I love the characters and how they all have strong personalities and how every problem in the story has a solution. There's not much to say and the book has really few spelling mistakes. It's a good book. I loved it

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I love the simplicity

The story is extremely short but it leaves me feeling satisfied and there are no hanging lines or spelling mistakes. Great job

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WORTH IT

The journey in this book is extremely sweet but sadly very short. Had a fun time reading it and very nerve wrecking. Can't wait to get started on the other books. I would definitely recommend

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Fantastic

This book couldn't have been any better The plot is so emotional which makes me emotional and I feel everything about this book. It makes me really happy. I love it and you don't have any errors.I'm impressed-to say the least. Good job. It was totally worth my time

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damnnnn

Hunney......let me just tell you.... WHAT YOU HAVE GOING ON HERE IS MARVELOUS.. Drama reality, the ending the beginning . everything is well thought of , clearly elaborated and satisfying.. I would definitely recommend

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saisfying

to be honest,during the first chapters of the book, the story was all over the place but as I continued reading on, it became good then finally it is fantastic, you have some major spelling errors and the story would be better if someone was trying to guess what was supposed to be written.. great work anyways..

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idk

this story is completely bland and i am not feeling it. i think you could do better and put some work into your characters.. not satisfied

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Wondeful

The romance was incredibly sweet and very touching. The characters were very humorous and really easy to get attached to. The flow is outstanding and the story is really very endearing. I love Theo and Hannah together and their interactions make my heart poop its pants. very vivid and detailed descriptions and well thought out plot. There are few to no errors in the story which makes the story a breeze to read. It's very hooking and the end doesn't leave me dissapointed. I really enjoyed it!!

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mind blowing

I have never felt so satisfied with my life... this book is thrilling ... makes me wanna have my own devil *wink* *wink*

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mindblowing

This was not what I was expecting. The twist and turns are really very great and how everyone in the story was connected at one point or another. The flashback was really very mesmerizing and how one generation can mess up and the following one just comes to hate each other for it. However, I really felt horrible that you put the female lead to be somewhat weak and helpless but because of her background, I can understand. It's really sad that Nate had to die but I loved it for what it was!!

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Wow!!

I think this is a really great stalker type of book. The flow is good and the storyline is very appealing to me. I didn't even think a plot like this is really possible. It's like a romance story, but the climax of the love is what this is all about. The problems and all of that. it's really very thrilling and very hooking. It's a great book with very few grammatical errors.

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good

you have a really good plot and i love the way you are giving us a two way perspective of the story... The story is really unpredictable and leaves someone at the edge of their seats. You do have some spelling mistakes and it would have been nice if you gave more descriptions to give a definite feeling... it would be amazing to have a book to with the return of the physco father.... good job though

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amazing

you have enlightened me more on the sub and dom topic and you make it different from other books which say that doms usually are bipolar although you do have some slight spelling mistakes

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nice try

you have an amazing way of expressing your ideas. Although your story is quite predictable and for it being a mafia boss story i was expecting a lot more violence...that would be cool

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This is perfect

I am on edge ... I LOVE IT ... No more no less

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not bad

You have a really great plot. I love how you can express your emotions through writing to a point that me as a reader can feel them. You have me on edge and I love it. It shows how good of a writer you are. Congrats. Although there are spelling errors that you have in the story. Plus, I feel like the ending was rushed and not everything was cleared out. Like, what happened to Dane, Suzy also completely vanished from the story, did Klaus get to know about Nico and Chloe, did Tristan find true love??? There has to be more. Also, why does Klaus hate Tristan that much??? You are amazing though and I totally loved the book

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