TheLaceratedBrain

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Interesting But Confusing?

So far into the story I think the writing style is very intriguing. Maybe my own personal opinion but I think at points it can be a bit too flowery and descriptive which kind of also makes it hard to follow. I'm also not sure what entirely is going on yet but I suppose I will just have to hang in there and see where it goes. The dialogue is well written though, flows naturally and is true to how actual people talk. I think some work could possibly done on toning down the descriptions of things.

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Great Start

Kind of interested in where this might lead as I don't typically see stories that start off with this theme. Well done.

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