The_eye_opener

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I like it

This chapter really peaked my interest surprisingly because my main interest is thriller and fantasy, my only dislike was the dialogue between the mother and the four year old,although i t looks to me like you wrote it like that on purpose, to someone else it may seem to be spelling errors that's the only change I would recommend,everything else was great tho

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Sorry im late!🙇‍♂️

I quite liked this story from what I've read so far ,it really is captivating,I can also feel the emotions in the words overall a brilliant book

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I apologize for my late review😅

Very professional writing skills,also the plot is very captivating I didn't see any spelling errors or punctuation errors,this story is brilliant!

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Sorry(」゚ロ゚)」

Firstly before I make my review I would like to apologize for my late response🤣🤣but anyways I quite liked your story it was lengthy and interesting I found no froblems with it really

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Noice

The overall story was pretty interesting it had me captivated and for a while I had lost my interest in reading.In chapter two you have a few tense errors but other than that great!

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Noice

Tbh I love the idea of this story and would love to read more and I only have one thing that I would love to address which are the technical writing skills, when you said she held my hand tight it felt like I was reading

something wrong you know that feeling you get when you've spelt something wrong that's the feeling I got so maybe you should have changed that to tightly and some of the words are the same so maybe you should read through this chapter a couple of times to see if anything feels like it needs to change!🙃

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