Tia Rose🖤

It's better to be brief than to be tedious 16

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Amazing

Story is amazing
Your idea is really good
But there are a little places in your story where I found myself lost
Make sure you change that
And conversations...I couldn't understand who said and to whom they said it to!
But overall the story was lit
I could actually feel the story

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Beautifully created!

The plot was good.
It was a little interesting...but then it was too short.
Hope you write a series for this novel!

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