Really Good, But Too Cheesy
When reading about Kings, Queens, Lord, Ladies, Dukes, and Duchess's stories like these, I always get so hooked, this book was really something and the author spent quite a lot of time thinking about it. But the introductory chapter was really straight-forward and into action. I like that a lot, but I was also confused as to what was going on, as it starts very suddenly. I think the plot needs some more work though, as it sounded really cheesy, and the story is kind of as well.
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Don't get me wrong, sometimes I love cheesy, but this was too much of a fantasy playboy sexy guy story, too predictable. I already knew what was going to happen with the love triangles and I could guess most things that would happen in regards to those characters. But, the other things in the plot, other than those characters were quite shocking, and a lot was so good and amazing. I hung on a lot of the words, speechless, the writing skill was really good as well. Your grammar was really good and the way you were able to explain some things; very much on point, you're a really good author.