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I am twenty-four and I wirte; Action/Adventure, Historical, Horror/Thriller, Mystery, Short Stories, and Romance books. ~I Permanently Live In A World Where All Of My Stories Blend Together Into One~

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So Good!

I cannot believe this author wrote a part 2 to the first book, and yes you will need to read the first one to understand this one, but this story is an amazing view of how messed up this world can be. This is an awesome story so far, I'm so excited to be able to read more and I'm really rooting for the main girl character, I'm wondering what will happen. If you like Horror/Thriller books, this book series will most definitely hook you in and leave you wondering for more, and I'm biting my nails in anticipation until it does get updated!

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One Of The Best Horror/Thriller Books I Have Ever Read

This book was so amazing, from the start of chapter 1, I was completely hooked and I couldn't put down the book. I binged read it because I literally could not stop reading this. This is a really good book if you want to see the inside of a scorned lover's heart, that turns murderous. It's the perfect blend of twisted insanity with a small blend of romance and so much drama and intense moments. I will absolutely recommend this, a big 10 out of a 10 I rate this, if possible!

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An Intriguing Beginning To An Promising Book

The plot I think was insanely unique, I love these kinds of stories and this one in particular had me falling in love with the plot and the characters. This had such an interesting take on Fantasy and had a slow peaceful pace on the chapters.

The prologue drew me in instantly and made me feel as if I was in the story. There was so much detail and immersive words and things that were explained and happened that pulled me in.

The character Princess Rosellia I really like and think she really loves her kingdom and the people who reside in it. I think she is fierce in her own way and she tries hard.

As the book progresses you can really be transformed into the book as the writing gets better and better. This was an exceptional book. The Kingdom, the fantasy-like-ness of this book was astounding and this author thought about the plot, the characters and the setting of this story pretty thoroughly.

I didn’t find any grammar errors or mistakes and loved the fresh telling of this particular story. I enjoyed it a lot. I love fantasy books and this did not fail.

I can’t wait for the author to write more on this book!

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One of The Best Sci-Fi Books

First things first, oh my goodness! That was so amazing and binge-worthy. This was an amazing representation of a true post-apocalyptic book. This author presented an amazing prologue that drew me in instantly and had me laughing in my seat and surprised at the twists the author put in. It had me in a trance, there was so much involved in this story so far and I can’t wait to see what else they put in!

It takes a lot for me to read certain post-apocalyptic books, but there was no doubt that I would enjoy this book. From beginning to current chapter, it was continuously spinning with knowledge, drama and action along with funny characters that will make you smile and there are chapters that will make you feel sad and possibly want to shed a tear or two for these characters whole had a hard life.

There was a few grammar mistakes but nothing to worry about as it didn’t take away from the story at all but if you ever go back and edit, I wanted to let you know.

The story setting of this book was amazing and quite original, it was unique and I couldn’t stop reading, I like the fact the author thought really hard about the details of names, places and settings as its shocking to read and see how everything unfolded.

Thank you for that amazing read and can't wait to read more!

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Very Rare and Intriguing

Now, here I was going to get ready to spam your chapters comment section with what I found personally confusing or something I wanted to point out. But I am flabbergasted, this book was a lot more than I was expecting! I could not find even a single thing I found wrong.

First; I want to congratulate you for writing one heck of a masterpiece! This book is a very rare one of a kind story.

Secondly, I love the quotes you threw in at the beginning parts of your chapters, I love it when an author does that, and you chose the exact right ones for each part.

I love how you put the copyrights in to make sure nobody takes your work and adapts in on their own, smart.

Third, there is so much character information and development it was hard not to get sucked into this story. It was cute, there was some humor and so many moments that made me squeal and smile. This story is really rare, a cute story that blooms, I at first thought it would be really slow, but that's the characters emotional moments and part of the story.

There isn't too many stories I read that are really good and rare, but these rare books in my opinion are apart of the best books I've read in my life. Granted, this is not a fantasy magical story, but it is a love story with a calming feeling to it, it was sweet and it made me smile a lot.

The story placement, writing style and plot are all amazing, the writing technique in this story is amazing and very shocking, it made everything so much easier to imagine and be placed in the story, you did an amazing job presenting the story to the audience.

I really hope you update soon, the story ended abruptly and I know it's still ongoing, but I'm really excited to see what else this author will come up with!

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Heartfelt and Interesting

Just by the two chapters I read, I know this is going to be a really good book. This is one of the most realistic books I've read. Somebody's life may look perfect on the outside, but behind closed doors, it's never the same. This is an amazing adaptation of a wealthy person's life, that has a lot of secrets involved. The plot is extraordinary and I love books like these. I think you need to work on your grammar just a little, put spaces and indents on where a new paragraph starts. But that's about it, you're a really good writer and know how to paint a picture with words. Can't wait to read more!

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Really Good, But Too Cheesy

When reading about Kings, Queens, Lord, Ladies, Dukes, and Duchess's stories like these, I always get so hooked, this book was really something and the author spent quite a lot of time thinking about it. But the introductory chapter was really straight-forward and into action. I like that a lot, but I was also confused as to what was going on, as it starts very suddenly. I think the plot needs some more work though, as it sounded really cheesy, and the story is kind of as well.

Don't get me wrong, sometimes I love cheesy, but this was too much of a fantasy playboy sexy guy story, too predictable. I already knew what was going to happen with the love triangles and I could guess most things that would happen in regards to those characters. But, the other things in the plot, other than those characters were quite shocking, and a lot was so good and amazing. I hung on a lot of the words, speechless, the writing skill was really good as well. Your grammar was really good and the way you were able to explain some things; very much on point, you're a really good author.

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Good Story So Far

I have a feeling, this is going to be a really good book once it's finished. I loved how you presented the introduction page, and whereas it does get a little confusing as to fully understanding what is happening, as there is so much going on, the character's story and development is already happening as you explain what's going on, and that's incredible a very strong start, but not too strong which makes the story just right. I can't wait to read more once it gets updated, I'm intrigued by where this story is going!

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Really Good

I haven't read a fanfic in a really long time, and normally I'm cautious about bxb books, but this one struck me as speechless and amazed, the storyline with these characters are amazing and the grammar and spelling are absolutely amazing, the style of this book as well I really liked, but the only thing I had a hard time was some sentences you didn't put the correct punctuation and it sounded a little off in places, but that's okay, I struggle with that too. I highly recommend this book to anybody that wants to read an amazing romance story even if it is bxb it is a really amazing story.

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Good But Confusing

I am completely obsessed with werewolf and witch books, and this is an okay book for one in the genre, but a few things confused me. The beginning starts off a little rocky, you have a lot of grammar errors, a few words would probably be flipped so it sounded smooth. I hope that makes sense. It is also really confusing, not much is really explained for the introduction and sometimes that's good, but it confused me too much in the beginning. Also, the witches' parts and the main male character parts would jump from place to place at first, going from one topic to another, then back again and continuing on. I loved the character's story though, I love how she saved him, and I loved how you explained him being a special being though. It was also a really rocky storyline, but it has the potential to become a really good Supernatural book!

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Pretty intriguing

I think the plot is pretty good, it centers around a killer's mind, especially a child who turns out to be a murderer. I think the dynamics are down-packed, the storyline grips you, and the complete and utter terror shakes you just reading these chapters, it was admittedly a little hard to read, but that's what makes a good story. I think it needs some work around detailing some areas in some chapters, but overall I cannot wait to read more, and see what her next victim will be.

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