Violet T.

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So Far So Good

Personally I think your story is off to a good start, but I also think you need to slow it down a bit. I know personally that I seem to love to rush my stories, and because of that, it can really hurt my book as for yours as well. Also, lots of your punctuation needs some fixing, so be sure to check that out, or like I said it can really hurt your story. That being said, I think you should add a lot more imagery and foreshadow. On the other hand, your story details and descriptions of the characters' are off to a great start, so please keep up your good work, but try to slow it down a bit. DON'T GIVE UP.

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Amazing!

I love the plot in the story and how relatable I felt to some characters! Knowing myself, I have to read a book with a lot of detail so that I can feel really into the book, and you rocked it! I love the detail you used, so please keep up all your hard work and keep writing!!

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