Yamileth Xiomara Zipporah

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2015 to current - Level 22 - Australian - Shawol, Carat, a-i - Role Model: Fleur Ferris - Fav Movie: The Greatest Showman - Also Me: @Amaryllis_Celestia & @NaqviLeysa

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Highly Recommended

I my self is a fan of kpop, I am no army BUT this is a really good book. it kept me hooked

I have never seen a cover like yours, its original, I also like Tiffany and Jessica. they are my favorites so far. It could change.

Your plot is well thought out and well designed, the summer got my eye, it is one of things that got me hooked on the story.

You dont have to be a kpop fan to read this, it is easy to understand and has an amazing story line, grammer and spelling is outstanding and the writing style is damn good

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Itโ€™s out of this world!

Like I said before, you are a very creative person and I hope you see that. Like your last book this book is also very creative, I canโ€™t pick over which one is better. Both of your books are better than mine, even your grammar, spelling and punctuation is better than mine.

I love how the chapters in this book is love and long means detailed and I like detailed books.

I can see youโ€™ve also worked very hard on this book and I know you will keep working hard on it. Like everyone else book, this book has potential and a lot of it. This book will do extremely well.

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I Love it

Iโ€™ve been slowly reading this book over the past couple of days, Iโ€™m loving it.Grammar and spelling is amazing. This whole story is amazing and creative, I love the names of the characters and you know where are you going with the book, I am close to the end and will still read it.

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I like it

I like it, I see how well it's growing well. it's one of these stories where we all see something special in it and I truly mean it, This could become published someday.

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I'm Loving This

I love this and I have added this to my reading list! I have read it twice now, still love it, I see you have some small grammer mistakes but so do I, All up i love the book and where it is going!

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I'm just blown away

I know this isn't writing but the art is just amazing. I'm about to go and read some of your stories now but if anyone is reading this, please go check out this amazing and talented person's artwork!

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20/20

I honestly can't wait and see what you have planned for this, it is looking real good so far!

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Couldn't of said it better myself

Prefect! Prefect down to every word, perfect down to the cover! everything is perfect and perfectly written! would recommend this book to everyone! 100/100!

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Enjoying it, would recomend

I enjoyed the first one and i'm enjoying this one. I would recomend this and the first book to anyone who is looking for something new!

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Awesome but

Its good it really is however try menting the trigger warnings at the trigger warning page as some people could be unsure what will be written.

The cover is amazing and styles like that is rarely seen in this app/sight. Its unqie.

The writing styles is amazing as well as the grammer and spelling!

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Update when?

I am genearly excited for the further updates. Its another good book with fbi and police. Again its something i dont really like but I like this. It shows about some criminals and the health of the fbi and police which is also a major issue in this world.

Well Done

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Love it!

I generally love it! Its fill of action and adventure and many many points. I am not normally a of fbi and police but this is good, its amazing. It shows how some loved ones are affected by things when others aren't.

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Keep Up The Good Work!

I love it! You write it so well how tommy changed during the exile, I love how you write that when he got to techno's techno gave him a potato. I love that you put warnings at the start as many people don't do that. I also admit those warnings do fit well however.

I am excited to see what you have to offer. I just hope you dont push yourself and rush chapters as rushing is where most mistakes will happen.

But overall I'm liking it currently!

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Cameron

First of all I would like to apologize for getting this review to you so late.

Second of all I read this and I loved it.

I love how you have added in a gay charater. I was shocked but also amazed because I can't find a lot of books with the lgbtq+ in them.

You have a good plot to the story and you are strong with knowing where you are going to put it next and I dont lie on reviews. I like that.

Its well and truely visible that your grammar, punctuation, spelling, paragraphing, etc. Is better than mine.

Also, I do see you becoming a published author some days because your book kept me dragged in. I couldnt put my phone down. I wouldn't leave my computer and I am sure to recommend this to my friends and family.

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I Lovett and Iโ€™m waiting for a update

I love it. I am honestly waiting for a update. This dragged me in by itโ€™s cover and plot. You are very creative Haebi. I hope you see that, I really hope you do.

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Defy The Odds, This need reviews and more reads

I like it, I really do. I was hooked and I want to read more. I like the plot of the story you have set and I know that you will stick to it. Grammer, spelling, punctuation is also better than mine.

I honestly donโ€™t know why this doesnโ€™t have any reviews or reads. I am happy to be the first review. I know that this book (and everyone from your group) will do extremely well.

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I love this!

When I saw this was in fantasy I knew this was gonna be good and I was right, this is good. I love the name of characters and the whole book is creative, I would see this being published into a hard copy book some day!

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Awesome! Sweet! Amazing! Recomend!

I do recomend this book to others! I enjoyed it along with many others. I am going to read book 2 tomorrow!

Grammar and Spelling is a amazing, perfect.

The book kept me hooked into keep reading it. I do suggest and recommend this book to new users and also old users!

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Love it!

I honestly love this! It pulled me in and kept me reading.your grammar and spelling is improving. It's better than mine. Keep up to magnificent work!

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Destiny

Everything is amazing, grammar and spelling is on point, highly recommend!

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I Love It

Some of these hit close to home, I love your work on this book. I hope you keep up the awesome work and have a happy new year

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I don't Know what To Say

I honestly, don't know what to say i'm shocked and still busy crying, I am a little confused if you will keep updating it or not, any option i am fine with, Keep up the good work!

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