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Arcane Chronicles: Book of Fire

I'm enjoying this. I like how the writer plunges us immediately into the story. The punctuation needs slight corrections in places but that's easily remedied and subtracts nothing from the story. Good writing.

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Loved It

I was very quickly drawn into the story. This author has a gift. Even his intro hooked me, with his wife describing endless skies that went on and on and on. I've seen such skies. So has almost everyone. That is the magic of his writing. I can relate. I loved the honesty of his writing and how beautifully he expresses those little things that make us human. He makes it seem so easy! Well done, Ian.

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Interesting Premise

Very, very few books succeed in mixing science and magic, and even then the balance is tilted heavily in one direction or other. DUNE is one. But then it's an award winning masterpiece that took the author a decade to write. The premise of your novel is refreshingly different. And I'm a fan of differentness. I haven't come across anything like it here and I think it can become quite good in its very different way. I get what you're trying to do and I think it can be wonderfully funny. That you're taking a brave gamble with this mix of genres (and it is a gamble and it is brave, and I applaud both) means taking that extra bit of time with it so it exactly represents your vision.

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