Amazing!! You have clearly put in a lot of time and work. you have created an absolutely brilliant world full of lore.
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I honestly can't fault you for your writing, you have made each and every character stand out in their own ways, each one shows their own personality and way of thinking.
Each place you have crafted and brought to life has so much detail and you've written it all in a way that makes it clear to the readers.
I can tell that you have a very precise picture in your mind that you wanted to put across to the readers and I can say that I am very intrigued and eager to find out more about your world, especially after reading the ending. I can confidently say it has left me on the edge of my seat and I can't wait for what you bring out next.
keep on writing!!