_Autumn_Amber_

Love writing and illustration. I'm an aspiring author hoping to get my work out there for others to enjoy. I'm a big lover of fantasy and adventure. New chapter will be posted every six days.

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Your book started off really well and ended the same, there was so much mystery spanning through the entirety of it that kept me on my toes.
The characters were created well and it's clear that you as the author have a picture in mind for each and every one.
If I were to offer advice to you it would be to perhaps add a little more detail here and there to really bring that image of yours to life and just be sure to correct a few spellings but other than that keep up the good work!! :)

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So I have read other reviews for this book and I do agree with some things they have said such as grammar and punctuation.
However, it didn't discourage me from reading in the slightest. you have an amazing plot that kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time, it kept me guessing what would happen next and surprised me too at some points.
I would definitely recommend it to those looking to read a mystery/Thriller and even for those looking to start getting into the genre I would definitely say give this book a read.
Amazing work keep it up, hope to see more like this in the future :)

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Absolutely fantastic!! This for me is what fantasy is all about, the lore the worlds created as well as the characters. and you have done it all.
The plot is so well planned out so far that it makes for a smooth yet eventful.
You've created each and every character as well as the places in a way that shows their individuality and quirks.
Honestly, this is an amazing read and would highly, highly recommend it for anyone that is a lover of fantasy.
Keep up the great work :)

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Amazing!! You have clearly put in a lot of time and work. you have created an absolutely brilliant world full of lore.
I honestly can't fault you for your writing, you have made each and every character stand out in their own ways, each one shows their own personality and way of thinking.
Each place you have crafted and brought to life has so much detail and you've written it all in a way that makes it clear to the readers.
I can tell that you have a very precise picture in your mind that you wanted to put across to the readers and I can say that I am very intrigued and eager to find out more about your world, especially after reading the ending. I can confidently say it has left me on the edge of my seat and I can't wait for what you bring out next.
keep on writing!!

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