Holly Scarl

Dark romance || Erotíca genre writer 🌟

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Breath-taking and intriguing.

I would like to start with the characters, especially James. Man he is one fine specimen and he certainly is a gentleman. I love the way you have shown the raw emotions and feelings of the characters. I read all the 7 chapters and one go and with a breath-hitching emotions at points. I couldn't find any prominent error and would definitely love to follow James's journey, ahead.

Good job with the plot and keep up the beautiful writing ❤

Ps: I hope Carter is a good guy!!

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A potential read

An amazing setup you have done here in context of environment. Magical elements and aspects of character as a dream walker is something unique to read. Only thing I would like to suggest is, at some points you have simply dumped the information rather than showing them as the plot proceeds. Make your readers feel those conflicts which the character is facing and then the readers will connect to your story. Have some faith in your readers and let them imagine the surrounding. Hope you understand my point and I am really amazed by the unique plotline here. I'm excited to see further developments in the story. Good luck & keep up the great work. ❤

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Something unique

This story kept me hooked from the beginning and istg I actually jumped and gasped at some points. Your writing style is really cool, especially your descriptions, they are vivid and clarifying in its own way. I love the plot here, it's not something typical but a new and unique thing. Though, I only have one issue. I definitely wasn't expecting this ending, it left me lil sad. Angel's ending made my heart crumple.

I would recommend this story to everyone who is in search for something new and not typical cliches.
A really great work. You've done a nice work writer. ❤

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Kiene!! ❤🌟

Kiene (that's the ship name!!)

I would recommend this beautiful piece of writing to all the genuine readers out there. All the emotions and events is so beautifully described here that I could actually feel myself experiencing those scenarios.
Second thing, your vocabulary, its just wow.
I only have one complaint, this ended too quickly. Like I want more of Kiene!! I absolutely adore your writing style and it was wonderful to read something so pure romantic.
If I could, I would have given more stars.
Great work ❤🌟

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An Adventurous Read

An interesting read. I loved the environment you've created here in the story. All the four main characters are so dynamic in their own unique way that it makes me want to explore more about their solo characteristics. Other thing which I loved is the flow. It's smooth and something which you can read at one go. You've done a nice job writer ❤

Just a small suggestion here, at some points there felt like the dialogues were all clustered in one point. Maybe a small break or new paragraph while introducing a new dialogue would sound good. I really enjoyed reading & definitely going to follow the story further as it has the potential to be an amazing – adventurous read.
Keep up the great work. ❤🍃

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Cool & Interesting

I would like to start with the fun part. It was so cute type, I literally laughed out loud. As for characters, Chase & Blaze both are charmers. Your writing style is beautiful & I would recommend this story to all the humor + romance lovers.
I would love to continue this story further as it would be exciting to see which way this journey is headed.
Good luck & full stars for your efforts & beautiful writing. :-)) ✨

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