_LadyBex_

Captivating

From the start, the story begins in an interesting way and as it goes it pulls the reader deeper into it. The suspense and the slow revelations make an interesting plot and a worthy read. There were some things I anticipated and also some plot twists I didn't seem coming. Overall it was a great read and would recommend to friends :D

Nice :)

This book kept me interested while reading it and I am expecting some good plot twists as it goes on. The author is skilled in descriptions and I enjoyed character interactions. I gave some mall suggestions to improve in the story comments but it is already a 5+

Bampires :D

This is a book with a completely different take out on vampires and I enjoyed that aspect. If you are looking for erotica read with a cool backstory about vampires in it look no further :D

Good start

There is only one chapter so far and I am liking it. The first chapter had an introduction to the characters and action which was nice. I am sure there will be some fine character development if it continues this way. There were several punctuation mistakes that are easily fixable.

nice

The plot seems straightforward but it has a dose of mystery in it along with some nicely written actional and emotional chapters. The main characters and their friendship is a strong, likable point of this story. There were a few punctuation mistakes, but nothing big :) I'm sure it'll be an very interesting story to read once it is finished.

Werewolf story with a twist

It was refreshing to read a story about werewolves that didn't have just the alphas in the first plan. The characters are likable and the author's writing style is nice. There were some small punctuation errors, but besides that everything was great.

Cool story

I loved this short horror story. The writing style and the flow of it was really nice. I got immersed in reading it. It was something I'd expect from a short horror story in a good way.

Recommended :)

The short horror romance story was intriguing and kept more reading until the end, but I would have loved it if there were more descriptions of the couple's dynamics. To see more of their ordinary life interactions before the big finale.
There are some punctuation errors but with a quick reread from the author they can be fixed quickly. They don't make a nuisance when reading.

A promising title

The author's writing style had a nice flow and was easy to read. The plot of the story slowly introduces the characters and their ordinary lifestyle, but it transitions into a compelling action or rather new discoveries that change the heroine's perspective. I think this book will have interesting chapters, an overall plot, its twist and turns once it is completed.