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Train Of Thoughts

I really like how this is laid out so far. I saw SMALL errors in grammar, but you usually don't notice them. Sara is brave right now, and I hope she stays that way. It's kinda sad that her parents divorced, but her dad was just---oof---mean.

Keep writing, because I want to read this forever!

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Viatrix

This is beautiful...just...all these emotions becoming an amazing, heartfelt book. One question, though...can I make these into songs? The lyrics would be by you, but like...I'd mix music and stuff. It's just beautiful enough that I'd want to make these heartfelt songs πŸ’™πŸŒΉ

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The Exit Plan

I ship Chantel x Will and nobody can stop me! Tristan is one of a few roadblocks to the ship so far, but it's a minor inconvenience. πŸ˜‚ Poor Will. The girl he'd loved since 8th grade, whisked away by some dude she'd met a day ago. I feel bad. But I'm seriously just waiting for the next update! EEEEEEEEE!

EXCELLENT WORK, NEVER STOP WRITING!

_originalswiftie13_

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Me & Her

The ending of your newest chapter gave me the chills. It's a really great story so far! A review swap would be wonderful! There are so many great chapters to read, and they gave me chills! AAAAA can't wait for more! Grammar is excellent as well! Grrreat job!

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The Life of A Bunny

In the prologue, the reader is immediately wanting more! The first chapter is really good! However, small parts that I had to edit were a bit wrong considering the English/US language. But overall, I am awaiting the 2nd chapter!!

With love from your older sister,

~_OriginalSwiftie13_ πŸ’™

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πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Slight grammar errors which made it a bit hard to read, but Liahnne and Collin- I ship!! Dave's a brat-

Keep writing, and small fixes can be the biggest impact on a story!

~β—‹_OriginalSwiftie13_β—‹~

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Dark

Multiple overuse of the main character's name instead of him or he or other male gender pronouns. Also, when you wrote "women" , it should've been "woman". Multiple grammar errors, and I don't really see a plot besides the doll. Also, you could use other words for the doll, like "small ceramic figure. It was still really enjoyable, and I'm waiting for the next update! :)

@_OriginalSwiftie13_

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The Upside

I really like this! It tells a story of how the Kaylee people and the humans were in a war and the products of afterwards. I know they aren't real (The Kaylee people), but Rayne and Bow are interesting together! Rayne's siblings, Moon, Sky, Sunrise and Sunset, tell a story too. I think Rayne's telekenisis is cool, Sky's super-hearing (whatever it was called), and Moon's See-In-The-Dark eyes. Sunrise and Sunset are who's powers I'm waiting for. Rayne almost getting raped was scary. The doctor and the tormenter are gon get it next chapter I bet!

This story has great potential, and I can tell this book will be a best seller! Keep writing, and never stop!

//_OriginalSwiftie13_\\

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School Boyz

Okay girl, this I remember. I remember I actually think I wanted to talk to you when you came. Hazen has their hard way. I'm pretty sure you got that way. Whereas I was born in Hazen. Aaaanyways, I'm excited to read more (even though I read 4 chapters yesterday, but let's pretend I didn't πŸ˜‰).

Great job from yo best friend besides Kemma πŸ€‘πŸ‘!

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You little...

You were so sneaky I almost didn't see the lyrics! Great job! SWIFTIES FOREVER!!!!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Queen of the Tigers

This has a very interesting plot, if you think about it. Tigers acting like humans. An average tiger with 1 unaverage thing about her, and she gets set off by the king's words. Then her parents die. 2 rabbits take her.

The story does go a bit fast though, but I'm excited for when it gets off hold and continues. Keep writing!

~_spinel_error_code_1 or Spinel

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Excited!

This is really good, I love how Xander was willing to tell her after she sort of begged to know if he was a werewolf. I actually suggested a pack name in which you replied to, and if it is the right name, I'm excited to read the next chapter!

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Wow!

I really like everything about this right now. Hydrochloric acid is a twist to what many would think about this story. AND WHILE SINGING AN ED SHEERAN SONG?! WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!! 🀩

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Amazing

So, firstly, I love that the cover is one of my favorite people in the whole wide world and one of my best friends. If you know her, you'd be able to tell almost immediately that the cover is Taylor Swift. πŸ₯°β€

I personally thought this was one of the best books I've ever read, hands down.

I love the way that it doesn't take forever to get to the climax, but it doesn't happen right away. It is very descriptive of the characters in my opinion.

I would honestly check this book out at my library, no questions asked.

Great job!! ❀

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