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When tongue fails to put out the words, my pen helps My works: -Mehndi Hai Rachne Wali (Ongoing) -Musings (TBA)

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A rollercoaster of emotions

I liked the general flow of the story. The way the feelings were described instead of her crying it out loud. I liked that the internal battle is signified as well. Overall the paragraphing is short but good.

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A MUST READ BOOK FOR ROMANTIC HEARTS

The writing was fluent. Like, honestly, it felt everything was beautifully and sequentially placed. Not a moment was spent where I did not look forward to the next plot.
The characters and their past was realistic and surely mixed well with the plot. Just a suggestion, try to add a variation to Justin's nature. Like don't always give him a stoic expression. Give a little bit more to his character and maybe a bonus chapter to show how he is different to people he loves.
As for grammar, there was no problem in there. There were variation in sentence structures which didn't put a monotonous effect to the reading. Even the paragraphing was fine.
Lastly, it was a great read. Can't wait for the next book...

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