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Great so far, but needs work

Okay so let’s start off with the positive. I really felt like I was back in their time and I thought your vocabulary usage was excellent for the time period they were in. In made me feel more connected to the story and characters. Great job!

The only thing I would say you should work on would definitely be your grammar and writing style. Many times you switched between tenses, which can be confusing for readers. Also, there were lots of run on sentences, capitalization errors, grammatical/spelling mistakes, dialogue errors, and so forth. I recommend you have someone review your chapters for you or get a writing app that can help.

Overall great story and interesting plot, can’t wait to see what happens next!

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