A. P. Harker

Logan, Utah

I've loved writing all my life and I hope to end up publishing a novel before I turn 18. I love everything dystopian and it's my primary writing style. Happy reading!

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Nicely done!

I enjoyed the prologue to this story. It is definitely the beginning of a great book. However, There are a few things that I would change. For example, the tenses are all thrown off. In one sentence you're in the past, then you're in the present, and it makes it a bit difficult to read. I would also be aware of run-on sentences or sentences that don't really make sense. Run through your writing with a fine-tooth comb and find the parts that don't make sense while you're going through it. They usually stick out from the rest of the good writing. Overall, though, it was very good and I look forward to reading the rest of it. If you could read and comment on one of (or both of, your choice) my stories, it would be greatly appreciated. Keep on writing!

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Good work!

I really enjoyed the ideas behind your story. However, the pacing was a bit off and I feel as though you could combine Chapter 1 and 2 to make one chapter. Watch out for your commas, spellings, and grammar. Nicely done and I hope that you post again soon!

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Loved nearly all of it!

I related to about 97% of these poems. The few I didn't feel are those that were more short, and I don't think that's you at all. I think that might just be me loving longer poetry, but you'll find people who love how you write and it will make your life better in the long run to know that those people are out there. Keep writing!

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