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๐™ฟ๐šŠ๐š›๐šŠ๐š—๐š˜๐š’๐šŠ

๐€๐‘๐Œ๐˜, ๐’๐“๐€๐˜, ๐€๐“๐ˆ๐๐˜ ๐Ÿ’œ | ๐“‚๐“Š๐“ˆ๐’พ๐’ธ ๐’พ๐“ˆ ๐“‚๐“Ž ๐“๐’พ๐’ป๐‘’๐“๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘’ ๐ŸŽถ | ๐šข๐š˜๐šž ๐šœ๐šŠ๐šข ๐šข๐š˜๐šž ๐š ๐šŠ๐š—๐š ๐š๐š˜ ๐š๐š’๐šŽ, ๐š‹๐šž๐š ๐š•๐š’๐šŸ๐šŽ ๐š’๐š ๐š–๐šž๐šŒ๐š‘ ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š›๐š๐šŽ๐š› - ๐š–๐š˜๐š˜๐š—๐šŒ๐š‘๐š’๐š•๐š ๐ŸŒ™ | ๐™ž'๐™ข ๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ง๐™š๐™™ ๐™ค๐™› ๐™ก๐™ž๐™ซ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™จ๐™–๐™ข๐™š ๐™ก๐™ž๐™›๐™š ๐™š๐™ซ๐™š๐™ง๐™ฎ๐™™๐™–๐™ฎ - ๐™–๐™ฌ๐™–๐™ ๐™š๐™ฃ |sฬทoฬท ฬทfฬทuฬทcฬทkฬทiฬทnฬทgฬท ฬทsฬทoฬทrฬทrฬทyฬท |

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Great!

I love the story so far. I'm looking forward to reading more! One thing you could improve on is your description. I can't really imagine what the characters look like, but again, it's early. I saw a few technical errors, but that can be fixed easily. Can't wait for the next update!

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Restoration

I like how I haven't seen this idea anywhere else, making it more interesting to read. It's action-packed, just how I like it. The characters are well developed and so is the plot. Something that I didn't like was how it took some time to develop, and I think it could've been done a little bit faster. Your writing style is very unique, another factor in making it more interesting to read. Although it wasn't the number one book for me, I would totally recommend this to someone else. Good work!

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Woah

Ok, lemme just say, I'll definitely keep reading this. I love the emotions portrayed. The characters are well developed and worth rooting for. It's interesting, and keeps you wanting to read just one more chapter. There are a few punctuation and grammar errors, but that can be fixed easily. Loved it.

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Exciting!

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! The only thing i would improve would be the description , but other than that, its great!

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Amazing ๐Ÿ’•

These poems are full of emotion. I could relate to all of these and I can't wait to read more! Keep writing, ly ๐Ÿ’•

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Amazing ๐Ÿ’œ

Everything written in the book is so truthful. It's very insightful and I think it could help many people if they read it. Thank you for recommending this, I really needed to hear these words. Keep up the good work bestie ๐Ÿ’œ

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Beautiful!

The poems and lyrics were beautifully written and very relatable! Your style of writing is captivating. All the poems painted some sort of picture, which was really nice. Overall, awesome and cant wait for the next update!!

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Recommended read!

Hi! Ok let me start by saying you have a great plot. It's descriptive and the characters are well developed, I've read the other reviews, and there's not much I can add. I would say that the writing style can be improved and the grammatical errors should be corrected. When it wasn't the greatest book for me (I'm not the biggest fan of horror but it's my opinion so it doesn't matter) I would totally recommend this to anyone who loves a good horror book!

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Ghoster

I love science fiction when my nose isn't in a romance book, so this one was great for me! I love your writing style, and the details you included made it better. I really do wish there was more. I love the concept of living in a virtual world. Overall I enjoyed it very much!!

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Great!

I love the story so far. I'm looking forward to reading more! One thing you could improve on is your description. I can't really imagine what the characters look like, but again, it's early. I saw a few technical errors, but that can be fixed easily. Can't wait for the next update!

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Good Work!

Your book has a lot of potential, and you could do better. I like the concept, as it is unique. There were a few grammatical errors but that can be fixed with no problem! The plot is well developed. I look forward to reading more!

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Suspenseful!

I loved this, mostly because of your writing style and all the suspense! I love anything paranormal, so I would recommend this very much! Loved your writing!

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Captivating!

Let me start by saying that I LOVE you writing style! The characters are very well developed and the plot is intense. Honestly, I usually go with romance or maybe fantasy, but your book has gotten me intrigued! I'm excited to see what you come up next! Again, love this!

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Mysterious!

I love the suspense and mystery of the story, and it kept me waiting for more. I'm usually not a fan of short stories, but this one was a real hit for me!

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Love it!

I like where this is going, and I'm looking forward to the update. I'll definetly keep reading!

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