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“The worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt” Sylvia Plath.

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A new spin on a very different tale!

Greek Gods are often associated with the likes of Percy Jackson and even The Mortal Instruments. They are an incredibly challenging genre and I am pleased to say that from the few chapters the author has written, she has done them justice!

The plot is captivating and despite the lead, Morgana, hailing from legacy, she is increasingly remarkable, relatable and raw. Her struggles stem from both real-life aspects, with just enough spin on the fantasy to make this story completely alone in this genre.
I am very excited to continue reading and applaud the author on the incredible work I have read so far!

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An exciting start!

As only the first chapter of the book has been published there isn’t much to go on, but it is an intriguing beginning with lots of potential! I am looking forward to reading Jasper’s character development and eventual character arch.
I would consider using grammar websites just to help clean up some mistakes that were there. This is something all writers struggle with so don’t let this dishearten you! The hardest part is writing the story and portraying your ideas, which you can do wonderfully!

Good luck with the rest of this write!

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A perfect read

Loved this story!
The character's are truly well developed and you were able to explore the way of the heart in such incredible detail, it was a fabulous read!
Thanks for writing :)

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Brilliant!

I honestly loved this story to pieces! The author has done a fab job in creating a story that is lifelike, easily conjured in the mind and brings a smile the readers face. This story is both daring, exciting and truly well written! The shenanigans described are hilarious and I would heavily recommend this story to anyone looking for a read that is something different. This story has broken barriers in storytelling, both in the way the author introduces their characters and how the tale unfolds.
I am very much looking forward to reading more from this author, this story was brilliant!

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A thrilling read that tugs on your heartstrings.

I tend not to read blurbs when I read a story because I personally am terrible at writing them, and so I fear that I would judge the story on this, and then not read this.
Therefore when I started this story I genuine has no idea what to expect and boy, was it a wonderful surprise. The Downside to Perfection introduces you to Jason, a man who has gone through the utmost terrible experience. The story recounts his experience by introducing us to characters in his past and present, all while discussing the true matter at hand, the impact.
Mental Health is no longer a term that is a stranger to most of us, but the author introduces the health condition in a brand new light. Through what it truly means to be struggling and to feel that the world is no longer safe. This dramatic read encompasses this while flitting through the past and present, so effortlessly, it is a true credit to the writer's talent.

I have no critiques to this story, only that no book is ever perfect and grammar is something that can always be improved, not that there was anything to note in particular when I read this.

Thank you for writing such an invoking tale and I am genuinely excited for your future works. I am so sorry that it took me so long to read it in the first place, I am glad to have been able to binge the last few chapters because it allowed me to truly feel what the writer intended.

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A beautifully orchestrated piece

I tend not to go for mystery stories but the writing and well driven plot made it easy for myself to be drawn in. Eden is a wonderfully complicated character that at points echoed a rawness that perfectly echoed the narrative of this plot.
For the author I am genuine in saying you have wonderful form of writing, your words are authentic to the emotions you wish to portray and in layman’s terms, you’re a damn good writer and I wish you the best for future your works! Well done!

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A different kind of fantasy!

This story is captivating. From the very first chapter, the author does a wonderful job in captivating their audience. What I've enjoyed the most is that this story is so unlike the rest within this genre. It is rare that a story focusses it's plot on siblings, and while it reminded me of the classics such as "The Secret Garden" and "The chronicles of Narnia" this story does well to establish it's own story.
Congratulations! You should be super proud of yourself. As someone who has attempted fantasy in the past and failed miserably, I highly commend both your talent and skills!

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I need more!

I absolutely love the direction that this books is going! The building tension is unreal and I don’t have the words to articulate how much I am itching for the next part! I have read whats there with just one cup of (now cold) tea and I need more! Keep up the great work!
Only small criticism is that your chapters are short but if anything it drives the story further and thats my greedy ass wanting more straight away aha.

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