Good so far
I found this book whilst going through the groups you were posting on, and I couldn't help but want to give it a read. I like the book, the plot overall is good, I am wanting to read more. My only hangup is that the POV's can be a little confusing, going from 3rd POV to Azure's POV within the same chapter confused me a little as I did not know what I was reading. The second chapters line spacing was all wrong and it was really hard to read, it's a little nitpicking but I'm a sucker for good grammar and formatting. Overall, I really like the idea, I think it could be great if you were to go through it with a fine comb and fix all the line spacing and punctuation issues that it has.
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Please do not take this review as me saying the book is bad = in no way. But use it as constructive criticism in order to improve!