Aashion✔

Muslim-YouTuber-Writer Books are life Want to be an Astronomer

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Ok , Its Great . The start was bit hilarious and and it was quite interesting. I like the character of Jade, I mean sometimes she could be a bit bossy or I don't know how to describe it but honestly she is the opposite of my character . She is frank also so I like that . The main part is ITS A CLIFFHANGER & Mafia . I really like stories with Mafia in it and the fun part is you hadn't reached the crime part so its kind of a cliffhanger and an interest boils in the readers mind. It's like a Drama/Film that I can picture it so its so fun to know what more videos are going to play in my mind in the future chapters. It's energetic and I don't know why I am saying this but its strongly ongoing. Keep up the AMAZING Work !

(Btw , pls can you review my Book ' Imperfect Sides ' as this review is part of our review swap)
I am sorry I reviewed a lil late .
Lots Of Regards
Aashion

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The plot is intriguing plus it's age-appropriate that's something for me to focus on. The plot is well explained and horror parts are written professionally also you showed the story instead of telling and it seemed like I am watching a movie. Hats off to the author. May you win this competition.
Inshallah
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OK, so the start was creepy yet incredible. I like the way you made dialogues and your word count is also progressive. I mean its really hard for me to write a chapter with 1000 words. The story was really different then most of books directed to the plot.
Its great and the cover looks like adventure I mean if you play PS4 there is this game called Uncharted 4 .
I like the way its person.

Tw can you review my book Imperfect Sides since its part if our review swap.

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Gurl, I am totally hooked. The start was exciting and it felt like I am also gonna go with them to the trip.
Its full humor and I like the way you created dialogs
Its pretty easy to understand. Grammer is good and everything is amazingly organized and professionally placed. The cover is pretty attractive and usually if I don't like the first chapter I don't read it because I am really choosy and hard to select because its hard for me to like something so I am proud that I could enjoy your story and I can also do review. I didn't even break a sweat reading it so in my POV its really good and there's nothing to change 📖😊

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I really and extremely enjoyed writing this book! And honestly its a great plot and different !
As far I can see , the word count got better than before and grammar is also good !
Its not that I am bragging because its my book , I did review by reading it a reader and honestly I enjoy it myself too . Maybe in the future when I get old , I will come back to see my books I will read this one !

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Ok, so the introduction is good and I liked that you kept it, First person, I don't know why but people think a character introducing themselves is immature (I don't think that way) The plot is different from most of the books I have read.

Ok, the chapters are too long then usual but what you can do is like divide them and add them into more chapters that way it wouldn't be a crowdy.
Also, leave a cliff-hanging scene at the end of chapters so it can excite the reader to read more.

I won't say anything about grammar though I am not a expert at it myself.

Plot is good but it's predictable. Identifications are interesting also!!

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Villa of Hills

I had edited it and made the mistakes correct. It will be still short as there is no rule that it should be long, it's something a reader wants but writing comes from heart and talent, not rules that make you think it's some compulsory job. I didn't change the plot since it's my original work! And today I just read it as a reader so I honestly am proud of it. I hope you also rate it 5/5 🥳💞💗

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OMG! It's amazing.
Now let's start with the summary: I read the summary and it was really good, an attraction towards the book. Ok, I never actually ever felt scared reading because it felt like it's just a book, not a movie but while I was reading this I felt my head spin not some regular spin the ones that give you peace or make you cold and that's when I realised that this book is worth reading. Especially, see usually people keep the starting a little boring and then bring suspense between the chapters but this book was amazing from the start till hopefully the end as I read 13 chapters. This doesn't mean I just read it for review swap I will keep reading this intriguing plot. You know when I keep review swaps I am more excited about getting a review than giving a review because it takes time for me to interest in a thing but I actually was looking forward to reading this as I got addicted to the summary! I love it and most amazing thing is that it's your first book. Now the main thing I feel is the way you describe a scene like a forest and a moon in chapter 1. It was quite professional btw this is the longest review I had ever written as I read this book by my heart and interest. Keep up the best work also many authors (also me ) thinks that using a foreign language results in Professional work!
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This is my First time rating 5/5 for all categories.
Ok so I like Myla's character so much I mean I want to snatch her strong personality. This shows how the writer put so much effort that everything seems so real. It's my honest review. As you mentioned it's not edited so I am not gonna include it. Btw please review my story, Jena, as this review was a deal of our review swap. And also keep up this amazing book.
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I hate it 🤮🤮🤢🤢

Seriously, I don't like it...😒🙄🤮🤧🥵🤮🤮🤮🤮🤕🤕🤕🤮🤮🤮

I Love It 🤩😍😍🥰🥰 It's so good and I never was into alphas but this only one chapter changed everything. I live the character of Elizabeth and I also have an aunt I am close to. The grammar, ahh breathtaking 😘😇😇😊Well sorry for the Prank I did 🆙

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Ok, so the yeah it's only 2 chapters and tiny but what you don't know that is that... Your story is so ADDICTING! I had enjoyed every bit of this story even though it's just a introducing Paragraphs but yet so amazing. I am amazed how you created the names of characters really differently and I don't think I can even think of such rare names 😇🥰 Will be waiting for more Chapters 😇🥰😍🤩

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Ok , so the summary was a bit too long buts its okay !! I really liked the first scene , I mean there are stories like where a girl wakes up in a morning and all that but the way you described and showed the scene was just something professional and different . There were repetitions of words and about grammar , as I said before I am not a expert myself but I have seen so far that every writer make mistakes includes me also !
I am just surprised by the plot , it was just so amazing and different btw can you suggest me any app or website where I can check my grammar and like how to write stories with all the rules ??
So I rate this Story 5/5 , BRILLIANT WORK !!!

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First of All, it's age-appropriate which for me is something to worry about because of mostly books. On inkitt are mature type and secondly the plot is different and amazing, really there is nothing bad in it so it's a positive review from me and about grammar as far I have seen none of writers are perfect at it includes me also but so far your grammar is goodly written.

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Ok, so I expected some chapters but there was only a first chapter, I gotta say it's a cliffhanger that brings curiosity to the reader's mind, wanting to read more and the scene of the Paris and ducks seems like a scenario of Miraculous Ladybug so honestly, it's an amazing start! I am kinda obsessed with it so hoping for more chapters... 😀😇🥰 Can you review my story " Villa of Hills " because this review was a deal of our swap. This is an Honest review, there really is nothing boring so it's addictive 😊😇

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The story is just amazing and it looks soooo interesting but I would prefer to make chapters a little shorter because it gets messy and crowdy plus overall its full of curiosity and understood able I mean the details about everything its just so easy to understand ...!!! 😀😀😃😃🙃🤩🤩😋🥲😍😋

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The most thing I liked about this chapter is that you didn't stretched it long and made it to the point . Secondly , there are a lot of professional and hard words used that forces the reader to search the word meanings , its hard but really worth it because the reader automatically learns new words plus enjoying the story !!! About Grammar , I can't say anything because I am a new author myself so overall your technical writing skills are amazing !!!
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Jena

First try and amazing work

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The Plot is super interesting to read and one other thing is that its appropriate for All ages .. Its similar to pixie cartoon and tinker bell , just a few grammar problems but otherwise its super great . You can show this to some adult who is good at English and help you with it .. otherwise keep it up , I would be waiting for Chapter 2 👋

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