ABrunetteGirl

Belle✨ Author on Inkitt and Wattpad (@ABrunetteGirl)🦋 Currently writing: If The World Was Ending☄️ Completed Stories: Trapped Love❤️ Follow my socials!

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Colliding Hearts

I honestly can’t fault this story. Your writing style is amazing. Your characters are so loveable and you convey their individual personalities and emotions so well. I love how this story warms your heart, makes you laugh and at times makes you want to cry. It’s such an incredible read for us readers. Everyone should give this a read. Can’t wait to keep reading!

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Bibliophile

I loved this book!
As I said on my Instagram yesterday, you have one of the most beautiful writing styles I have ever seen😊
You describe things amazingly and right from chapter one I could picture everything perfectly.
The only thing I can suggest, but this is purely my personal preferences, is to shorten the chapters just a bit, I’m not always the biggest fan of long chapters but I know many other readers are.
Other than that, you truly deserve every read this book gets, well done❤️

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Counting Stars

Wow I loved this so much and I really wasn’t expecting this plot at all!
I love how well you convey the emotions of your main character and that you never explain how her friends die but subtle hint which gives the reader all they need to know.
I also love how you link the counting stars.
Just a tiny tip, check over for spelling and punctuation in your first paragraph. It could be broken up a tiny bit and a few commas added but that was the only problem I could find. I love it otherwise!

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