A Love Which Was Never Meant To Be
I liked the whole idea of a girl telling a past story to her ex-lover. I don't think I've ever read a book with that concept which shows originality.
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However, I did find things a little confusing. An example would be in the first few chapters where our main character starts the story outside, then the next time we go back to them, they are in the living room. I also noticed different grammatical errors that went from misspelled words to words that weren't used properly. I also noticed repetitiveness in the first few chapters, but that slowly started to go away the farther I went.
Overall, I think that with some good editing that this book will have a lot of potentials and will be liked by many. Keep writing.