Addison Prieur

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Unfinished business

Even though this story is just getting started it is so great. I cant wait to hear what she has panned. I hope you can continue and finish this story, I know it can be hard to finish a book when you do not know where it’s going. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

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I shouldn’t want you

I didn’t like they way you described Anna and Danny in bed and in the pool house, but they story was amazing and I really liked the plot of it. I think you should not have made Ellis so likeable because then readers were wanting Anna and Ellis to end up together, when the story was written for people to want Danny and Anna to be together.

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