Adalia S. Lansthrone

β€œπΌ π’Ήπ‘œπ“ƒ'𝓉 π“Šπ“ƒπ’Ήπ‘’π“‡π“ˆπ“‰π’Άπ“ƒπ’Ή π“…π‘’π‘œπ“…π“π‘’ π“Œπ’½π‘œ π“ˆπ’Άπ“Ž π“‰π’½π‘’π“Ž π’Ήπ‘œπ“ƒ'𝓉 𝓁𝒾𝓀𝑒 𝓇𝑒𝒢𝒹𝒾𝓃𝑔. 𝐼 𝓂𝑒𝒢𝓃 π“Œπ’½π“Ž 𝓁𝒾𝓋𝑒 π‘œπ“ƒπ“π“Ž π‘œπ“ƒπ‘’ 𝓁𝒾𝒻𝑒 π“Œπ’½π‘’π“ƒ π“Žπ‘œπ“Š 𝒸𝒢𝓃 𝓁𝒾𝓋𝑒 𝒢 π“‰π’½π‘œπ“Šπ“ˆπ’Άπ“ƒπ’Ή 𝒾𝓃 𝒢 π“ˆπ’Ύπ“ƒπ‘”π“π‘’ 𝓁𝒾𝒻𝑒𝓉𝒾𝓂𝑒?” - π’œπ“‚π‘’π“π’Ύπ’Ά

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Stars Stars Stars

Are you someone who loves stars and searching for something unique and different? If so, I would recommend this story. Many stories of the fantasy genre I've been reading are all rather clichéd and while still enjoyable, it's refreshing finding something different. The story just started so I can't fully appreciate it, but from what I have read, it's amazing and has lots of promise. Can't wait for more updates. 😊

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Refreshing and Humorous

This story was not what I expected. The twists and turns were artfully created and smoothly executed. The humour was well placed and the characters very likeable and with distinct personalities. I would recommend this novel to anyone who wants something light, interesting and original. There are a few grammar errors, but aside from them, the story overall was pretty great. I enjoyed it. Good luck with all your other literary works!!

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An Entertaining Read

I loved it!! Of all the books I've read on Inkiit, this one is probably my favourite. Every chapter had me laughing. The main character is a humorous and interesting yet somewhat relatable person. The storyline is absolutely gripping. I'm actually impatient for the next updates.

I noticed to convey the tones or moods in certain scenes the author used emojis. Traditionally, you wouldn't see a book using emojis in that manner, and some would argue it's an incorrect usage of emojis during a story. However, the beauty in writing your own novel is you can do whatever you want with it, regardless of rules. And I think adding the emojis was a perfect addition to the story. Because of the emojis, the reader had a clearer understanding of the mc's feelings during a particular scene/moment. This added to the overall enjoyment and pleasure of reading this book.

If I have any critiques, it's the fact the grammar could use some improvement. Due to grammar errors, the flow of the story was interrupted. Other than this, I have no complaints.

I thoroughly loved and enjoyed this Novel. I would definitely recommend it to anyone searching for a fun light-hearted, enjoyable read.

Please update soon and often :)

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Avengers!!

This story is great for Avenger fans. It's ongoing and the story is written in a way, that the reader is the one living the story. As a result, it's very interactive and that makes it so delightful and exciting to read. If there is anything I would suggest fixing, that would be the paragraph structure. It's too long, and that makes it a bit difficult to read and concentrate on the story. Try breaking them up into smaller paragraphs and alternate them, so if the last one u wrote was long, make the next paragr[h shorter. That will significantly improve the flow and readability of ur story. Otherwise, it's really enjoyable, so don't give up on it. Looking forward to updates!! ❀❀

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Captivating

I was hooked. The story was a bit too wordy, and took a bit of concentration to follow, but overall, I enjoyed it. I'm very excited and can't wait for the next chapter. Awesome job!

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