Adija

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A sin of her own

I have just some minor 'problems', *that completely is an overstatement*. sooo. when you are writing about shifts or any other event which can be interpreted in more that one way just try to be more descriptive. and the second thing is that you didn't give a background to some characters their story of their past like in detail it's just a wee bit brief. and you are incredibly good at cliff hangers. one more thing is that I really liked is how you built the plot, hell a lot of suspense. overall a DAM good story. a tiny request is that I need her to be with true mate, I need her to kick his arse and turn him into a strong wolf. and yeah give that woman a dam throne. like, let her overthrow the elders or something. believe you kept me up all night.

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Under researched

Hey, sorry for the low rating, I know it is not very encouraging as a writer, but you said that 'ren' is a sociopath, that would mean they would not react to convoys well, yes. But it is more like overeating. You might want to say a psychopath. One more thing hacking don't work like that. If you want to talk a bit more and in detail about this feel free to ask on my wall. The plot has potential but a little more research is needed. Hope this helps!

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a pleasant rollercoaster ride

I am one of those who read along while it was being written. Loved the story but the number of times this utterly evil genius of an author gave me heart attacks is astounding. Could have been longer(i know I'm a selfish bitch but come on we need a sequel.) Anyways love the style of writing and how we have a backstory for each character and no background characters who are just cutouts. Would love to read a whole another book about Ryder and wild and the babe. May God be with ye.

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