I'm new to this site and this is the first story I've read on here, and let me just say, it was amazing. I read all 60 chapters within less than 48 hours.
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The story just flows out of the computer screen. It's easy to read, easy to follow, and the pacing of the plot is brilliant. If you are a fan of the Kingdom Hearts Universe, this is definitely a great read. The author captures the essence of Kingdom Hearts and stays true to all of the characters personalities, for the most part. There were only a few moments in the story that I felt were a bit jarring, but they are barely noticeable in the grand scheme of things.
As far as the writing goes, the author is very accomplished. I have never read such a well-written fanfiction. Usually, I find really descriptive action scenes to be boring and hard to read, but the author navigated through those very well and frequently. There was never a dull moment for me. I also usually don't like original characters created for fanfiction, but her created characters did not take away from the already established world. They enhanced it very well. I also appreciated the author's genius in the explanations about the Unversed and the way Kingdom Hearts and all of its plot lines were expertly woven together to center around Kairi.