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Great read. WARNING YOU WILL CRY

I loved this book so much. Anybody that makes me cry is a good book. That means I got attached to the characters,and their story. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

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Awesome story

Great job i can't wait for your next update.

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First time.

This is my first time reading a horror book. Well....other than goosebumps. But that was a long time ago. I enjoyed reading this book. It kept me intrigued. The plot was great, and the characters were fantastic. You did a great job writing this book. There are a few grammatical errors, but we're human. Those are easy fixes—great job writing The Dog.

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Great simple story.

I like this story. it was easy to read and the plot was quick and simple.

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Creative Novel

This novel has a great plot so far. I love that the storyline picked up in the beginning. I would suggest you spread out some of the main points in chapters. Instead of feeding us all the main points at once, expand and elaborate on one or maybe two points (If they coincide) at a time. By doing this, we get more details, and you increase the longevity of your novel.

Also, (Just a suggestion) take some time and go back through for grammar and punctuation. I’m not going to knock down a star for this because at least you tried. It’s there, but it just needs to be cleaned up. Great punctuation and grammar will keep your readers attention on the actual story and not on simple, easy to fix mistakes.

Overall, I enjoyed reading this so far. Thank you so much for sharing your creativity, and I hope to see more soon.

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Loved it

I really enjoyed this story.

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Awesome

I love this story. It was a fast fun read.

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Awesome Read.

This was one of the first books I read on Inkitt. I love it so much any book that make me turn my phone off and set it to the side for a good minute to collect myself is great.

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Wolf not Wolf

Wolf not Wolf has a great plot. And it an awesome story to read. The author does a great job in leading into the the story, building up to the climax, and then ending with great chapter. To the author I love that you wrote you own story. My only critique for you would be to ge back through and edit the spelling and grammar.

If you want more advice from me feel free to ask me on my wall. Your book was great and I enjoyed reading it.

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Quick read

Fun and quick

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I can't wait for the update.

I can't wait for the next update. But I will I know it will be awesome. Great job by the way.

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Great story. I'm hooked

This story is very entertaining. To begin the characters are unique both personality wise and descriptions. The author is very good at detailing scenes and I just love that we aren't stuck in one place. If you love a good story and a lot of reading material I recommend this book. Great job.

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Can't wait to read more

I love reading. And I love reading this book. The characters all have a personality. The plot itself is building and I can't wait to see what happens next. I love reading werewolf books and this one is an original and I'm glad it is. I'm so tired of reading the same story line. Great job Cora and keep going.

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LOVE IT!

My my my. I love the book, Maya. Great job, I couldn't put it down.

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Awesome book

Thos book had me begging for a happy ending. Luckily there are two other books after this. I can't wai t to see what happens

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Great read

💘 love love love this book. It made me laugh, CRY, double take. I was happy, sad, 😠 and then 😊 again.

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Loved it

Great short story. I really enjoyed it

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LOVE LOVE LOVE

I read this book a few months back. It was 👍 I wanted to come back and leave a review.

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Great book

Love the story. I like the mystery aspect

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Cute fun story.

THANK YOU!

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Quick fun read

I like this story. It was interesting and fun to read.

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Loved it.

Really enjoyed this book. On to number two!!

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Can't wait for more

I started reading this book a few months back. I'll be patient and wait for more. Great job.

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I enjoyed this.

I love this story. Its original different than a lot of werewolf books. I love how you opened up a new plot without starting a whole new story.

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Great Detail Story

I enjoyed this story. The details were great, and the characters are fantastic. I know that you put a lot of thought and work into this, and I applaud you for that. I love reading, so the long chapters were great, and the "detail dump" well that didn't bother me. Thanks again for writing this fantastic read.

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I love that it's different

I like how this novel jumps right into the story. I think it's impressive what Impact women have in this dystopian society. I mean, they're using lanterns. I guess the guys should call Thomas Edison and get some advice. This whole layout shows how much power a woman could have over men. If the men weren't such brutes, kidnapping, and selling women. I'm happy to know Emilia has Jonah to protect her.

I hoped that Emilia would be a little stronger when she first got captured and not as submissive. I can understand why she kept quiet, though, trying to protect herself from any unnecessary harm. I'm wondering if she'll try to make it back to her own time (if there is a way) or will she stay with her mate.

This is a great novel, it's different, and I enjoy different, especially when it involves werewolves. Everything is so generic and repetitive. I can't wait to read more keep up the excellent work.

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I couldn't put it down!

I really enjoyed reading this book. I knew it would be hard to put down. In fact, I started reading this at ten in the morning and finished it around midnight. The plot of this story was clear, and the characters are very special to me. I love their personality. There is so much life is in this book. I love to read, and very few books can make me cry, laughs, basically an emotional roller coaster. So congratulations AlessaBarnes, as far as I'm concerned, you're on my bookshelf along with Sarah J Maas and Jennifer Armentrout.

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