AJ Wylder

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Supremely Written

I was a little apprehensive at first about whether the level of writing would be consistently this good, but the book did not disappoint. The quality of writing I would give 10 stars if I could, seriously amazing. Can't wait to read more

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Unique Story

I really enjoyed the cutting between POVs, the beginning hook was sensational. Really great work
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So Exciting

I read Lie and was so excited to see book 2 was out. It was really clever the way that you had a flashforward at the very beginning. Why did he try and kill his baby sister?????? I have to know more. Amazing writing.
Maybe just summarise the first book at the start so the reader isn't thrown into the deep end straight away. But very good suspense.
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Sinfully Romantic

There's only one chapter so far, but the tension and suspense is so high already. I love Amber's character and personality, she's the perfect balance between mysterious and romantic. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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Suspenseful and Romantic

The build up in the story was superb, I loved that final plot twist with Skyland's parentage, mind blown! Lucifer's character showed major development and growth in a beautiful way. I really enjoyed reading this.
It was a little confusing at the beginning, after a while everything made a lot more sense.
Arynn is sooooooo cool!
I loved it so much.
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Elegant Plot

I've read a book similar to this called Roseblood, but had to say that this was far more intriguing. I loved how intricate and delicate the plot was, and the whole romantic feel to the story.
I do however, think that the romance itself was a little rushed, but that is a subjective opinion obviously. And every now and then the present and past tense get a little mixed up, but that's only a small technical error.
Overall, I really enjoyed it, love Porter and Ryker's relationship.
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Interesting Start

I love how you made the story relatable and managed to get the correct emotions from the reader at the right times. I can really empathise with Nick
As it just started I can't give a full review on plot, but think it is a good and strong start, I am excited to read more.
Sometimes the tenses were a little off, but that's easily fixed so don't worry too much.
Overall, well done, good job.

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So Cute!!!!!!

Sometimes, stories take a little while to attract the reader but this one does it almost instantly.
I really loved the sibling relationship between Ryu and Yuki.
It can be a little hard to keep track of all the names with Hina and Hana, but because the character development was good, it makes sense after a bit.
Really good Mean Girls moment, super relatable.
It would really help if you went into each character's backstory a bit, but I love it.
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Delicate and Dangerous

I was pleasantly surprised with how well the writer's balance between fiction and reality was. I love the rising tension with Lilly's character and enjoyed how well developed she was.
It's refreshing to see a book entitled 'the arrangement' in which the girl is a strong protagonist who is highly successful.
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Romantic and Sappy in a good way

I was scared to read a cliché story with no plot whatsoever but was both surprised and overjoyed. I love the bubbling tension between the two. The only reason grammar was 4, was a small thing, just the Lloyd Llyod thing, I found it kind of funny, but just watch out for it. Can't wait for more!

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Exciting

It is really refreshing to see a story written from this perspective. I enjoyed the action however wish that it was a little more broken up into paragraphs to make it easier for the reader to understand. The plot is both dramatic and action-packed and deserves the reader's full attention.
Overall, it was pretty good, a little hard to follow everything but I'm sure it will clear up as the story unfolds. Great use of suspense.
The narrative is unique and done well.
Keep writing!

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Amazing

It was so good. I loved the character builds and the chemistry.
I also really enjoyed how well everything fitted together in terms of plot structure.
Beautiful

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Beautiful

I personally found the story uplifting, and beautifully conveyed. Amazing characters you are guaranteed to fall in love with and cry over.
It was truly refreshing to read a story that reflects the tragicness and beauty in life, bringing hope to all our readers.
Amazing work, sometimes it is a little hard to keep track of who's who at first, but a few chapters in, everything makes more sense.

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