AJRS

Writing is my hobby, not job so my life won't revolve around it.

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One of the best stories ever

The characters are unique, the plot is outstanding and the events that have happened all throughout the book are thrilling. I love the dedication that was put into writing this book. I am sad how the book has come to its end but i sincerely look forward to reading more books written by this author.

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Could be better

It's rushed and needs editing. The grammar is bad, the story is rushed and half the time I don't know what is going on. It needs some fixing up and more descriptive sentences. Think of it as a recipe, you can't just write a recipe and say "then I put all the stuff needed in the cake," no! you have to add the flour, add the eggs, etc. EDIT IT! The hard parts over, you've got a good plot but now you need to work on your descriptive language.

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Captivated

I love how badass the girl is and the plot is purely brilliant. I'm captivated already. Can't wait to see what happens next! 😁

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