Aleena Agnes Sparrow

Calicut

Words are like swords of rage.Actions are like spears that thrust your soul.And if I try, I'll master them and turn them into something beautiful

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Revenge is best served cold!

The thing I like about the story is that the grammar is spot on(In my knowledge), the vocab is really good and the style of writing is really complimenting. It is really enticing. I am no fan of romance but this story captured my attention. Good work!

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Well done!

The story is really good(from what I read) There is right amount of suspense that makes people flip the pages. I am no expert in Grammar and punctuation so I loved the plot line.

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Light hearted

The book is very light hearted I really liked how the convo between the two main characters is building up. I will surely update the review as i finish the book but I thought I would just rate it with what i have read.

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Gripping from the start

So far... It is awesome. The world building has been well thought out. The character development and the way the author writes... All plays out well. I thought of quickly writing this review because I see no one has rated this story. Once I finish the book. I am going to write a good review since I loved the story from start.:-)

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So far... Interesting

It is a good story. Although there is a wide variety of vocabulary used, the grammatical part is a bit haywire. That said, I think the story is good and enjoyable. There is room for improvement but Keep up the good work👍🙂

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Good plot👍

It is a good story. The grammatical error makes it a bit hard to read. But that aside I like your writing style as it is so flowy and easy. There is still room for improvement but keep up the good work.

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Good job

The story is kind of good. Although it is too short for someone to get a good grasp of the situation. But the writing style is good.

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Gripping and interesting

The story is about Egyptian mythology and demigods and all. I think any person who likes that stuff or someone new to the genre will like it. The way the author uses words is perfectly balanced. Though I would love the chapters to be a little longer( Personal opinion). Overall I like it.

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