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I love the usage of 2nd person POV. I think it really makes this so startling, so personal.
It reminded me a bit of a Star Trek Next Gen episode (when Bev Crusher went to her families home and got stuck with the family lover/ghost). Except this is much better.
Awesome job! Totally needs to be published (if it isn't already).

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