Best friends don't sleep together
I really liked the plot. While there are the usual tropes and clichés, the writer manages to fit in some brilliant elements of surprise.
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Some scenes are too drawn out, in my opinion and the characters can be a bit more rounded. E.g. the narrative style doesn't change with the different POVs so the voice is not very representative of the character speaking.
On the other hand, I love how relatable the story is. The description of what the characters are feeling is amazing and I love how the writer manages to explain the characters' different side of the story without turning anyone into a complete villain or complete victim. Life is not black and white and I think this story shows that.
There are grammatical errors throughout, but nothing that cannot be fixed with some thorough editing.
On the whole, I enjoyed reading this story and found it difficult to put down!