Alias Tummas

I'm curious, creative, mysterious, explorative, imaginative, argumentative, exact, abstract, comedic, tragic, flawed, normal and weird. I guess it depends on the weather...

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Gripping and Emotional!

From the very start of this story you can see this book has potential. The prologue is amazing and I was immediately hooked. The first chapters are a bit slow and I think (in my very humble opinion) can be more flowing. However once the pace picks up the story becomes more relatable and emotional. I would also like to see some more back story for the characters because they all seem so interesting. What I really like is the dynamics between characters, the personality growth and the promising plot. I can't wait to read more!
I will recommend!

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Oh Snap!

I just couldn't put this book down! I kept reading till 2am because I binged on the first 13 Chapters.

The characters are well rounded and relatable. All of them have unique traits that reflect in the way they act and speak which is a talent not many writers have. The plot is interesting and shows potential from the get go. The writing style is amazing! It is gripping and humourous and drives the point home.

Most of all though, I love how the characters' feelings, misgivings and emotions are described and how hot issues are so smoothly and realistically addressed. I am most impressed by the realistic degree of harassment Rae faces, and how she deals with it.

I will keep reading for sure and recommend this story!

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Thrilling!

The plot is one of a kind and the way the writer portrays the story is like watching a movie. I love how direct it is. The characters are great. Dark and Ray are amazing together and just like their names imply, it feels that these two are exactly what the other needs.
English is not the writer's first language and it shows, however, it is very easy to follow and somehow made it more endearing to read. Wonderful and thrilling and definitely very unique!

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Candyland

Incredible! Thrilling and gripping from the very first line. There are only 2 chapters so far but I can tell the plot is amazing. The writer's descriptions are gory and graphic, making for a great horror book and yet it is knitted with mystery and edge. The writing style is on a whole other level!

Well done! I can't wait to read more.

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The armoured wolf

It's hard to review things like plot and character growth from just one chapter and a blurb but I can tell this is a good book.

I like the writing style well enough and the hook is amazing. From just one chapter I am relating to the heroine and despising the villain, hoping that justice is served in the coming chapters.

Recommended!

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Best friends don't sleep together

I really liked the plot. While there are the usual tropes and clichés, the writer manages to fit in some brilliant elements of surprise.
Some scenes are too drawn out, in my opinion and the characters can be a bit more rounded. E.g. the narrative style doesn't change with the different POVs so the voice is not very representative of the character speaking.
On the other hand, I love how relatable the story is. The description of what the characters are feeling is amazing and I love how the writer manages to explain the characters' different side of the story without turning anyone into a complete villain or complete victim. Life is not black and white and I think this story shows that.
There are grammatical errors throughout, but nothing that cannot be fixed with some thorough editing.
On the whole, I enjoyed reading this story and found it difficult to put down!

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