Allie Belle Harmon

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Beautifully written

This is a great story with an intriguing plot. When I started reading it, I found myself so engrossed in it that I was surprised when I came to the last available chapter. Awaiting new chapters and hoping they aren't long out. Thank you, Author.

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Holy Dang

This is a great story full of unexpected twists and turns. The thriller aspect of it is truly intriguing. The whole story could use some proofreading to fix some grammatical errors. Although, this story needs no help with plot. The time jumps were a little confusing in the first chapter, but by the second chapter, I began understanding what was going on and that basically eliminated any sense of confusion. And Damn, The Oculus is one messed up man. Also, I called why his MO is what it is before the his flashback.
Great job author. Can't wait to read more of those absolutely incredible story. 😁👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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Just WOW.

This novel is fast-paced and interesting. The grammar does need some more work in some places, but the plot, settings, and characters feel well thought out. Each chapter I read leaves new more on the edge of my seat, wanting to know what happens next, and that is what I look for in a good novel.
I love the twists and turns that this novel has taken so far, and I can't wait to see where you take it next author. Thank you for this wonder story.

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