Allison C.

Hogwarts

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Honestly, it's a pretty interesting plot, but you have many grammar mistakes. You need to know the proper way to write dialogue and there was one time where instead of 'knight,' you wrote 'night.' Your descriptions are pretty good. So overall, it's interesting with some problems you should fix.

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Awesome description

Wow, awesome description! It's like a professional short story thing we read in class haha

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