Allison Scanlon

Sag Harbor, New York

Aggressive progressive, in my fifties, married, mom of 3, owner of a fireplace shop, fitness enthusiast, storyteller, UMASS alum

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His Hidden Badass Queen

Interesting story idea and intriguing title. I noticed some conflicting parts to your character, might be wise to look at that. And probably plot out the story structure and try to keep it simple. Can’t be easy to write in a language that isn’t your first so I’m impressed. Keep at it, especially the grammar. Reading other successful published YA books can help. Good luck!

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After the Rain

Writer has a strong voice. The feeling he conveys is incredibly relevant. But there is hope in his message. I would love to read more!

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