AllyMay

Hello everyone! I have always wanted to write a book but never knew how to take the first couple of steps towards that goal. I am learning as I go and would love to hear feedback on my on going book!

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Captivating

I read the first two chapters and I was intrigued the whole time! I really enjoyed Emma walking the walk. Meaning that she was able to recognize that she would be no better than the books she hates if she didn't take this leap of faith. I can see the first two chapters be the beginning of a Hallmark movie! Great work! :)

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Sweet

This story brings me back to high school! Trying to see who is in what class and if you like the teachers you got. I enjoyed the different personalities each friend is bringing to the table. I can tell that there is some tension between Sky and her dads friend and I am interested to learn more about it.

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Interesting start!

I thought your over all idea of the story is good. It has me hooked to see if she will betray Cassidy or if she will obey the destiny her father laid out for her. During some parts I was confused on who was talking during some of the dialogue. I'm excited to read more!

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Amazing!

This story had me hooked on the first chapter! It is a different take on a magical world I've read before and that makes it feel fresh and new. I love the old stories and songs that are woven into this book. Just amazing!

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