Amateurwriter01 (K.Essler)

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Sexy

Wow this escalated quickly, and it was pretty sexy indeed.

It was good but as said before it does need some serious editing. All I can say is stick with it and don't give up, especially if you really enjoy writing. Also reading more stories does help you improve, you pick up on others writing styles. It will also teach you sentence and paragraph structure for future stuff you write.

This is a good start don't let people's comments ruin your love for writing. My writing was terrible in the beginning and I am still learning. I still think I have a long way to go. You have the talent in you, it just needs to be refined more.

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Wow...

Wow is all I can say. If that story is true I am so sorry. No one should have to go through something like that. That is a story that will stuck with me for a while.

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Love it!

I have to say I really loved this story. It takes you on an emotional story ride through the whole thing. It made me laugh, angry, even tear up. The descriptions were amazing, they made it so easy to picture everything that was going on. There was so much fantasy in the story, from the magical school, to all the different mystical creatures.

I highly suggest this story to anyone who loves fantasy. I am so glad I got introduced to this story. I'm so sad that it is over though.

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First one!

This was my very first novel I have ever written. I have to say I have had so much fun writing it. I wanted to keep going and never stop. There were even times when something tragic happened to a character and I teared up writing it. I really hope other's will find the love in this novel that I did writing it.

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Amazing Chemistry

There is some amazing chemistry going on with the characters. Their descriptions are written excellent, and the dialogue is easy to follow. I can tell it is going to be an intense and hot story to read. I can't wait to read more.

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Can't wait for more

It started out excellent. The story seems great, I love that he is willing to give up anything to protect the one he loves.

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Unique Spin on the Original

This is very good so far. If you really like the Harry Potter series, you may definitely love this story.

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A Must Read!

This story is excellent. The descriptions were amazing it was easy to picture everything that was described. I would definitely recommend reading this book

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Awesome Story!

I normally wait till after I finish reading a story to review, but I wanted to put this out here now. I will add more to it when I finish reading it all. I am loving the descriptions of the angels, the battles, and everything else. In just the first 3 chapters it immediately pulls you in with the action and story.

I thought at first this would be a highly religious story, but it isn't. It is much more fantasy than anything. It even has other mythical creatures which is great. I'm definitely going to be reading this story till the end.

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Heartwarming

It's beautifully written. It's full of emotion and brings a tear to your eyes. Good job with this.

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Very good start!

It's a really good start to the story. I can see this is going to be very dramatic and quite a bit of tragedy. There's a few technical things you can work on but so far it's really good. Keep on writing!

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Great

Now this is they type of book I love to read and write. I was instantly engaged. I'm only a few chapters in but I'm loving it so far. I am definitely going to finish this book. There are some errors I noticed but it didn't take anything away from the story.

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Very Good

The story is much different than anything I have read. It was a crazy documentation of events between the bully and victim. I really liked how it evolved over time. The ended was unexpected but very nice as well. I would definitely recommend this story to others.

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1st time!

This was the first time I ever wrote anything like this. I am kind of nervous putting it out there. I really hope everyone likes it and would tell me what they think. Also if I should continue on with the story.

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So glad I decided to read this

I'm not a big fan of reading horror. I have to say this was excellent. I think this might have changed my mind, and may want to read more horror. I will definitely read more if it's from this author! Superb indeed!

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Read it now!

I didn't want to stop reading this the whole time. It even interfered with my work. I made people wait so I could just finish reading certain parts lol. As you can tell I really enjoyed it alot. The characters were so well written and the story was engaging. It pulled my emotions I'm so many ways. I have to say Azriel, is so awesome!

If you are looking for a great story you should start here. You won't regret it. Well, I think it's time for book 2!

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Excellent So Far!

So far I have read the only 3 chapters out. I have to say I am really enjoying this. All the character in it are great. I love the setting and all the descriptions. I can't wait for more chapters to come out.

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Awesome!!

This is so great. It's a perfect read for anyone needing help on here. It answers pretty much every question you have. Also the section for story reviews are amazing. This is awesome!

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Sweet Love

This story is very sweet. Im smiling the whole time reading it. I highly recommend anyone to read this if they love romance. It's a great story so far. Will add more when I read the rest of the chapters! So far it's great.

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Strong Emotions

This was a very emotional piece. I can tell you put a lot into this. I think you were a bit upset when writing this, that you missed a few words here and there. It is good, just need to clean it up a bit. You are an excellent writer.

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Forever loving it!

I'm loving this story. I find the plot and characters so fascinating. Your writing style is excellent. Supernatural romance is some of my favorite to read, of course I tend towards werewolves. Don't hate me! This story deserves more people to read it. Feel free to post it on my wall. I want this to get the attention it deserves!

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A glimmer of light

This is a great first draft to your story. There are a few errors and confusing parts in it, but I still enjoyed it. The character development and the relationship between the two seemed to happen rather quickly. I enjoyed all the chapters I have read and plan on reading more. Don't let the reviews discourage you, you are doing well. Keep writing. Good job with this.

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Good start

This is a good start. I like the idea you have for this story. It's hard to give a good review off one chapter. Thus could be good, you just need to clean up your punctuation and Grammer a bit. This is good. Keep writing!

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Crazy Good!

This story is crazy good. Im really loving the plot and characters in this. It is very unique, I haven't read or seen anything like it. If you love the supernatural and other types of creatures, you will love this. I highly recommend this story.

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Great so far!

Okay, I was going to wait till after I finished this story, but I had to put this out there. This story is great. I'm loving the main character and her banter with everyone else in the story. So far every chapter I read had me smiling. The writing is excellent, it's a must read.

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A great fun story

This story was so much fun to read. It left me wanting more. I didn't want it to end. I am actually hoping you might think of adding more to this soon. It had me chuckling pretty much in every chapter. It was excellent. I still want more of this.

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Texting

This was a story I originally wrote for a text message story app. It did so well there I decided to turn it into this. I really hope people like it as much as I liked writing it.

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Amazing!

This story is so awesome. I am loving every chapter even more as I continue reading. The characters are unique and the dark storyline keeps you on the edge of your seat. I look forward to reading more and more of this story every day.

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A must read

This is an amazing story so far. The character descriptions and their personalities are very well written. The story started out very intense. I can't wait to read it all.

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