suzubells

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This is a pretty funny story, what with Brave Heroics and all. The plot is pretty cliche, but that's fine because of the twist you put on the characters. I look forward to seeing it unfold! However, it can be difficult to tell who exactly is talking at times, so if you could fix that it would be wonderful. Also, what happened to the prologue?

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