Amnesiac

review

Hey, this is a really great story. It's an interesting spin on your average fairy tale, and I'm intrigued to see where it goes. I'm a little puzzled why Suri is treated like dirt, but hopefully you'll explain that somewhere along the line. I understand that she was born from a terrible thing, but why didn't they just send her away altogether? Was it a mother's love? I'm just thinking to myself here, but anyway, the rest of the characters are interesting so far and I look forward to their development.