Anastasia O'Dea

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Great!

Though jumping from so many perspectives isn't my cup of tea, the story is well-written with a refreshing flow to the writing style and kept me engaged throughout the tale. Overall, it's intense, humorous, and a real attention-getter. It's not only erotic but presents sweet and entertaining moments of intimacy experienced by the host of characters, which makes it easy to want to support them. However, as I said at the beginning, too many shifts in perspectives too quickly tend to break the immersion for me personally, but apart from that, everything was amazing. Keep it up, I'm looking forward to viewing more of your work.

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I love it

I loved the story. The title made me giggle a bit but the story it’s self was an emotional roller coaster. I really was drawn in.

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