Andy Dashner


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Good job!

(Rewritten review)

I liked the plot! I really liked how you gave us an insight on April’s life as a child and the trauma that made her who she was. After her only true love died, it wasn’t a suprise that she turned out that way.

However, sometimes I felt like it was too rushed and didn’t explain some part I wished would be explained. Good example is what happened with her parents, how she got away with it, etc..

You can probably remember all these things from my last review:)

Big praise on the poem you made! I loved it, so creative. I’m curious about more insight on April. Good luck!

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