Angélica Vera Vidal

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Not really like the story..to much blabla not enough deepness in the plot and the characters. To many problems with the grammar and spelling also

It's a nice plot but very hard to read...the continuance between chapters make it hard to understand...and characters are to shallow...not very realistic. For example he is rich, has a mansion but doesn't buy her a good car after marriage?...odd.

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Beautiful descriptions

The writing style and rythm is wonderful, you really see yourself in the story, it's hard to put down.
It's a beautiful love story full of round characters it's easy to fall in love with every one of them, even Zeke.

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Nice piece

Even to it is a interesting story I feel you could develop more the state of mind if the characters...be more descriptive of the mood they are in. And the sex seens are just so soft you should not make so much fuss about it.

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