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AGNI

I've read only a few chapters and it's already interesting. It'd be nice if you could edit the book now that you've completed it. Nice and unique work.

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Nice Story

It is a nice story, but you need to focus on increasing the readability. Too many incorrect punctuations, grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, etc.
Use Grammarly to edit before you submit the chapters. It'll help your story very much. Just the free version of Grammarly would make your story much better.
Better the grammar, more the readers would be inclined to continue to read.

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Nice Story!

Starting is good and it's a story worth binge-reading. I'd like to read the entire story.

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